Well, you've definitely got my attention now. (LOL) The earlier chapters were a tad stilted due to all the stage setting, but things are definitely rolling now. I honestly didn't see this one coming. Kendall, huh? Can't wait to see what else you've mixed into this pot. Please update soon!

Author's Response: There is a lot of mixing going on, one which I assume won't spoil, but only add to the broth, seeing that I am the only cook.

ok so, a few things. first, it might just be me, but i think you use the term "cum" quite a lot. ie: "friend-cum-sister. You may not want to get too familiar with certain phrases. Secondly, is it wise that Jean gave Ororo a sedative after sustaining a head injury? It's just a story, i know, but if that was done in RL it could cause more damage, especially if she slipped into a coma.
Other than that i'm finally starting to get into this fic. It's flowing a bit better, making a little more sense and i like the direction this has taken. Awwww, Logan and his amazonian tribe.