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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-06 - 01:47 pm Title: Memories Lost

Aww, Logan and Kendall. He makes such a good daddy.
And little Kendall matching colors! So cute. I hope they are going to tell her about Ro being her Mommy soon.
On to the next chap! I want to find out why Ro left...

Reviewer: Taa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-18-05 - 07:39 am Title: Memories Lost

I'm a tad confused. If Logan has previously been to the X-Mansion in a 'public' confrontation with Ro, why did the X-Men act like they had no clue about him in the early chapters? Why did they view his connection to Ro as surprising if he'd been there before? And it struck me as...odd...that Ro had so little physical interaction with Kendall in this chapter. The only touching was initiated by Kendall to compare 'colors'. I realize that Ro was still in a bit of shock, but no hugging or acknowledgment to Kendall that their similarities are due to Ro being Kendall's mother? Just...odd. I'm still curious to see where this is going, so please do update soon.

Author's Response: There wasn't a public confrontation during Logan's first time at the x-mansion. He was just snooping. It is shock, hesitation, fear that Kendall might not like to get to know her and a whole lot of suppressed dreams/memories/nightmares that play a part in this.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 10:03 pm Title: Memories Lost

can not wait for the whoe story

Author's Response: Thanks....an' I can't wait fer yer reviews!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 07:51 pm Title: Memories Lost

wow..wow. Well done on the statements of a child. She would say something like that.

Dear God...I'm sitll questioning how this happened..how Storm forgot. I can't see Storm leavign her child and her husband of her own free will....I'm lost!!!


But a great addition which makes me think you shoul dhave posted part 14 as well....so we can move right along!!

VB

Author's Response: She DID leave and there was a reason for it.....what it was, well....in good time. You just keep sending in those reviews n' I'll keep updating.

Reviewer: RHapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 07:14 pm Title: Memories Lost

you've just posted this and at this very moment i am hoping you are starting on this next chapter.



Author's Response: Working on next chapter....right now!!

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