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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-06 - 03:55 pm Title: Fried Nuts

Ow! Poor Logun ;) I hope for him that this was the last time he got his nuts fried, heh.
Can't wait to see how it went on between them back then.
Oh, and yet some more new characters. I think I lost track of all of them a bit. But I'm sure everything will fall into place soon... For now I better not try to put everything together in my head. That would be a bit too confusing for me ;)

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-06 - 12:43 am Title: Fried Nuts

I actually found this part of the story very funny. I must agree with Rhapsody...there are way way way too many characters. And it's really shocking ot me..how Wolverine would go to such great links so people wouldn't attack his home..but so many people seem to know where he is, or will know.

I mean how much protection does he realy have? And let's look at these two kids. Iknow their purpose is to bring down Wolvie and his house..but come on..what of the newer ones brought in like Dazzler..what's their purpose. They shouldn't have been brought in if we were already gonna have these two or three characters show up.


It seems like a mess really.....Not to bee to critical. I mean I love my Kendall/Storm moments. Which of course is undeniably excellent. And I really can't wai to see more development on that end. I want to see more Storm and Wolverine..but a briefing of the history is great, because I really do want to know the real background of Storm's selective memory and also how she and Wolvie hooked up, as Storm today can't stand Wolverine.


So my only problems are the over use of characters...it's watering down the fic a bit..because you have to be awatching out for everyone and everything. It makes the story a bit disturbing to read.

VB

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-08-06 - 02:43 pm Title: Fried Nuts

Question, why after the long flash back, that finally gave insight on Ro/Lo would you add more characters? Why all the characters? I'm sure at some point your gonna bring it all together but with the addition and addition of more characters i feel like you're getting away from the possible root of the story.

Author's Response: The characters (specially the one introduced latest) are going play an important role in the RoLo dynamic. As for moving away from the story....you'll see soon!!

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-08-06 - 11:29 am Title: Fried Nuts

I love Logan as the sensitive hero! I can't wait to get more of the RoLo backstory.

Author's Response: Coming soon!! Along with a lotta trouble!!

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