The interaction between Ro and Logan is just great! Loved the part when she hugged him :D I bet that was the last thing he expected her to do.
So Magneto is dead to the rest of the world now and wants to get Xavier killed... how very nice...
Uh oh, who's this new bad guy/girl? Deathstrike maybe? Is Magneto putting the metal (Adamantium I guess) onto her bones now?
I wonder if Mystique will do something about her plan to kill Wolverine...

Author's Response: The new bad girl is someone we know already.....As for deathstrike...maybe soon!!

Hmmmm....well this is interesting. First comments, I love the first part of Storm's past..nicely written. And I like that moment in time. The whole thing was cool...I'm all about non-powered stormy....so when she's like that and mainly human I get a kick..don'tget me wrong..she has th ecooliest power on earth though.

Then we have the second part. I like Peitro/Wanda, but what's their importance in this fic.....they seem to get their own air time quite a bit.....

All in all great story..and can't wait for the next chapter!