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Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-14-06 - 04:01 am Title: Coming Closer

I gotta disagree with Rhaps. Screw Ro/Kendall moments. More RoLO. Geesh. Yeah, yeah, she has a kid, needs to bond, blah blah. Take it from me, that bond is ingrained. It is THERE. Now, love between Ro and Logan may need some time, effort, nudging.... you get me. Now, get on it!

Author's Response: The upcoming chapter is going to be RoLo (past). Don't have much in the present. Lets see what can I do with them!!

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-13-06 - 12:54 pm Title: Coming Closer

you said you're letting the fans write this one for ya, so GET back to RO and Kendall!

Author's Response: Let me get the RoLo part done first!!

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-13-06 - 12:06 pm Title: Coming Closer

pee pee,hoo haas lol

Author's Response: A couple of light chapters to get the changes in Ororo's personality. Hope you liked them!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-13-06 - 07:32 am Title: Coming Closer

More and more attraction towards each other.
"‘Hmm, nice chest.’" - too bad she didn't mumble that one out aloud while dozing off, heh. That would have given him a ... hard time again :)
Ohhhhhh, Sabretooth. Can't wait, can't wait... I love him :D I also hate him, heh. Hate to love him, love to hate him. Dunno %-)


Author's Response: YuP!! I don't have any love for Sabertooth, except for getting his ass kicked...athough, he will get his kicks in.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-13-06 - 02:48 am Title: Coming Closer

Sabretooth that bastard...he really scares me. I think out of all the villians next to Sinister he's the one that freaks me out the most...

Anyway great new addition although I do have one sort of complaint. I feel the direction has completley changed. At first the initial chapters were extremely dark and brooding, we're talking about from chapter 1 until Storm went to the house and before Dazzler showed up. Even the initial story o fhow they met was broody....Storm and Wolverine that is.

But in the last two the three chapters, I've felt a distinctive shift in the direction. Don't get me wrong I still like the story..and it's kind of a nice wake up with some intermittent comedic relief..but now I think it's getting a bit ridiculous...and really messing up the flow of the story.

And I hope it doesn't come off too harsh, you know this is definitely my favorite story next to Secret's from you, but it is a bit weird these last few chapters....

Anyway can't wait for the next chapter anyway...it's hopefully going ot bring the story back on track...



Author's Response: The shift IS there and is deliberate and temporary. It is about Storm, the 'New' Storm going through the rounds to find herself. If you check the Ultimate X-Men, the Storm there also comes across like this (atleast to me). She was kinda campy at first, but as the series has progressed, she had grown into herself, becoming more confidant, both as a woman and with her mutant powers. All the funny stuff is going to end soon....this was probably the last chapter. Next is not only the 'two' from this chapter, but a third foe, whom I've mentioned and who will rock Wolvie's world and send him on a trip of a lifetime....a 'past' lifetime!! Already said too much!!

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