Sabretooth that bastard...he really scares me. I think out of all the villians next to Sinister he's the one that freaks me out the most...

Anyway great new addition although I do have one sort of complaint. I feel the direction has completley changed. At first the initial chapters were extremely dark and brooding, we're talking about from chapter 1 until Storm went to the house and before Dazzler showed up. Even the initial story o fhow they met was broody....Storm and Wolverine that is.

But in the last two the three chapters, I've felt a distinctive shift in the direction. Don't get me wrong I still like the story..and it's kind of a nice wake up with some intermittent comedic relief..but now I think it's getting a bit ridiculous...and really messing up the flow of the story.

And I hope it doesn't come off too harsh, you know this is definitely my favorite story next to Secret's from you, but it is a bit weird these last few chapters....

Anyway can't wait for the next chapter anyway...it's hopefully going ot bring the story back on track...



Author's Response: The shift IS there and is deliberate and temporary. It is about Storm, the 'New' Storm going through the rounds to find herself. If you check the Ultimate X-Men, the Storm there also comes across like this (atleast to me). She was kinda campy at first, but as the series has progressed, she had grown into herself, becoming more confidant, both as a woman and with her mutant powers. All the funny stuff is going to end soon....this was probably the last chapter. Next is not only the 'two' from this chapter, but a third foe, whom I've mentioned and who will rock Wolvie's world and send him on a trip of a lifetime....a 'past' lifetime!! Already said too much!!

Excellent update. I was totally into this chapter. Great balance of funny and adventure. I will never get over Wovlerine buying pads...too funny.

I'm also wondering why Wolverine is pulling his pants down.he better not piss on her! ^_^ Oh and I like the addition of Colossus in the Brotherhood..nice addition.

All in all great chapter....I'm pretty much into the past story..although I still want to find out more of what happened between Kendall and Storm when Kendall found out..that little snippet is not enough. Or the interaction between her and Laura (poor girl).

Peace!

Author's Response: *piss on her!*....EEEWWWWWW!! GAH!! Will come to the present....just as soon as I reach a certain point in the past.

Great chapter! The whole "pads" thing was just classic! I laughed my ass off.

Author's Response: Thanks. That really is a classic!!

That Laura/Ro moment was very moving. Especially her shy request to hug her.
And Kendall calling her Mama! Aww... Finally the little one knows the truth. And against Ro's fears she seems to be more than fine with it :)
Argh... I just splurted some tea out through my nose thanks to Kitty losing her clothes! OMG LOL! (note to self: never ever drink while reading on your laptop!)
0.o She's talking! Things are getting more and more interesting! :)

Liked the start of the different paragraphs. Kill, kill, kill. Heh :)
Looking forward to more Ro/Kendall moments. Those are great!
The last paragraph... is that Creed they are talking about? Just a thought because of the "healing over it" comment... and the killing of course ;)

I hate those lab bastards! Not only do they deserve to get killed, no. They should be treated like their "subjects" before! A quick death is way too nice for them fuckers...

Whoa. So they really have a shared past. Come on Logan, spill it! I want to know everything now :)
He lives at a mansion? Nice!
They have a daughter? omg... Totally love her introduction.
Did I mention I'm loving this story? :D

So Mystique betrayed Logan with Creed? Heh. :) Well, he IS pretty hot...
Good to know that she's not willing to go against Wolverine.