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Date: 12-17-05 - 10:03 pm Title: Memories Lost

can not wait for the whoe story

Author's Response: Thanks....an' I can't wait fer yer reviews!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 07:51 pm Title: Memories Lost

wow..wow. Well done on the statements of a child. She would say something like that.

Dear God...I'm sitll questioning how this happened..how Storm forgot. I can't see Storm leavign her child and her husband of her own free will....I'm lost!!!


But a great addition which makes me think you shoul dhave posted part 14 as well....so we can move right along!!

VB

Author's Response: She DID leave and there was a reason for it.....what it was, well....in good time. You just keep sending in those reviews n' I'll keep updating.

Reviewer: RHapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 07:14 pm Title: Memories Lost

you've just posted this and at this very moment i am hoping you are starting on this next chapter.



Author's Response: Working on next chapter....right now!!

Reviewer: Taa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 03:35 pm Title: Discovery

Well, you've definitely got my attention now. (LOL) The earlier chapters were a tad stilted due to all the stage setting, but things are definitely rolling now. I honestly didn't see this one coming. Kendall, huh? Can't wait to see what else you've mixed into this pot. Please update soon!

Author's Response: There is a lot of mixing going on, one which I assume won't spoil, but only add to the broth, seeing that I am the only cook.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 12:55 am Title: Discovery

wowo....what the hell is goign on? What the hell is going on?! Jesus..this is just beginning.....where's Punisher?! But this is excellent...wow. it's Kendall!!!

Great dialogue and greatly entertained.

Author's Response: Thanks. Don't have much knowledge about the Punisher (character wise) so can't write him well. Also, he just doesn't seem to fit here.

Reviewer: Vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-17-05 - 12:34 am Title: Coming Together

Now that's a great new update and sheds some light. now I'm wondering if it was under amicable circumstances that 'Ro ended up leaving or something else. It's rather strange what might have happneed to her memory. And I wonder how close she was to X 'Laura' and Wolverine. I also wonder if it was before Jubielee since Jubie doesn't seem as affected as Laura is by Storm not remembering. I also can't wait to find out more about Kirika...that's a great intro for her. But again Wolvie is a pimp daddy...too many bloody women.


Can Storm at least be good friends with the punisher? Can he be introduced and she's close buds with him...this is so not fair!!

Going on to chap. 12 now!! Man Magneto is quick!

VB

Author's Response: All has been revealed in the following chapters, along with a few new mysteries. Wolvie IS a pimp daddy....just not how you think!!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-16-05 - 10:54 pm Title: Discovery

ok so, a few things. first, it might just be me, but i think you use the term "cum" quite a lot. ie: "friend-cum-sister. You may not want to get too familiar with certain phrases. Secondly, is it wise that Jean gave Ororo a sedative after sustaining a head injury? It's just a story, i know, but if that was done in RL it could cause more damage, especially if she slipped into a coma.
Other than that i'm finally starting to get into this fic. It's flowing a bit better, making a little more sense and i like the direction this has taken. Awwww, Logan and his amazonian tribe.

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-16-05 - 09:59 pm Title: Discovery

Oh Sh*t, this is getting good! This explains the "protection" they were giving her, but how does Jubes and X23 fit into this equation? They almost seem like a family. Can't wait for another chapter!

Author's Response: They are a family....and there is more of 'em.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-16-05 - 04:38 pm Title: Coming Together

next chapter...

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-13-05 - 02:03 am Title: The Other Side

plz let it get bloody
lol

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-13-05 - 02:02 am Title: The Other Side

sweet little jubilee wanting to kill someone thats sick and twisted but you know what? i think i like it cant wait to find out why there so much hostility between x and storm

Author's Response: Revealed in the following chapters!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 09:50 pm Title: Haunted Pasts

“I want to know.” - Yeah, me too! I can see some RoLo moments coming... whee... :) As for Logan's injuries... I think he was lucky! Did you see the previews on the upcoming "Ultimate Wolverine vs. Hulk"? The big guy just rips Logan appart! Throws his legs four miles away from the rest of his body... Ow! Anyways, heh. Like I said, I think here he was damn lucky :D Nice to see his girls switch into full working mode, taking care of him. Better trained than the X-Men, heh. Nice. So Gambit flirts with everyone but Ro... What's that about? Hope to find out soon!

Author's Response: That's been revealed (Remy/Ro) in following chapters. Hope you like it!!

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 04:16 am Title: Haunted Pasts

You have been busy! 4 different story updates?? Wow, I'm impressed! With the conclusion of "Cleansing", this has become my new obsession story. I'm so curious to find out what was done to Ro and how Wolverine knows her. Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: All is being revealed!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 01:23 am Title: Haunted Pasts

okay I'm a bit lost as to what's going on? I think I'm trying to still connect Wolverine and Storm's history. I do, however, like the info background on X23.....that was excellent. Although I hope to see her become a bit more human...a bit more feminine. I'm also wondering why Gambit treats Storm differently from the other X-Women...which is very interesting. I wonder if she has some marker on her of some kind by Wolverine. I also have another question....when Storm was taken is it possible tests were done, meaning biological tests of eggs and insemination?! Just wondering! Or even clones?! VB

Author's Response: All your questions will be answered....soon!!

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-05 - 01:03 am Title: Haunted Pasts

very nice cant waitt till the first meeting between mags and wolverine hope it bloody and someone needs to die *grins evily* any way cant wait

Author's Response: Will get to that soon. Also, getting the RoLo factor going!! As for dying...no one as yet. Someone will die in this fic. that much you can be sure of....and it won't be Logan (this is not Survival)!!

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