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Reviewer: Jamie B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-05 - 05:04 am Title: Questions and Answers

Can't wait to see what happens when Wolverine shows up! Good story!

Author's Response: Next chapter is gonna be Wolvie and the X-Men. Hope I can get it right.

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-05 - 08:50 pm Title: Questions and Answers

I thoroughly enjoy this story, and the build up is quite good, will very much look forward to the next parts, and I do hope there will be many o_O As for characters; Even if it’s just cameos from known people its still fun to see the way they are incorporated into the story. And what a female entourage you have given Wolverine ;p just hope Jubes will not persuade X to try and get high on sugar :) and this story so far has had had me laughing on several occasions, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks for the appreciative review. It seems that some people don't like the fact that I am taking so long for getting RoLo together. As for the cameos, I had said earlier, I am going to use everything I've got for this one. So far, have used Elektra, Fury and Det. Sara Pezzini. Have a couple of others in mind right now. Jubes getting X hopped up on sugar-bombs, now that is an idea. Jubes and Bobby are for the comic relief. As for Wolverine's female entourage, what can I say in that too, he is a ladies' man.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-05 - 05:23 am Title: Secret Surprise

No no no...Take your time with RoLo, just to see them in similar scenes would be enough to soothe my appetite. This story is absolutely amazing. I have nothing else to say about that. I love that you have so many characters. Nick Fury (personal fave) damn it you even brought in Dazzler, to me she's normally in the trailer park for unused mutants like Cloak and Dagger. This absolutely excellent. I so want to see where this is going. And Stormy is so how fuckin' cool? I wonder if she has hand to hand combat experience, I'd like to see her in a fight with Wolverine. That would be interesting! Actually I like that Storm is a woman of few words and I also like the fact that she's sort of a strong, silent personality resonating in the fic. I find that Jean talks a lot, but over all this is great. I also like how Rogue AND Jubilee are like his kids, as Jubilee always should be! So this is defintely most welcome. I also like this team sort of think with Beast and also ELektra, all we need is Black Cat and you've got a whole mess of trouble. Wow!!! I really just can't wait for the progression of this fic. And I can predict that this fic is probably going to be the longest fic ever, most definitely hitting the 150+ (of course if carried correctly) chapter size. Nice set up! This is going to be a great saga. Can't wait for the next update! VB

Author's Response: Glad you like my cahracter portrayal...even Rogue, huhn. Let me see if I can get Black Cat in this one, even thouhg she has not direct link with Wolverine. As for number of chapters, haven't decided yet, altough your number is a tad bit more than what I would use for a single fic. Maybe break it up into 2 or 3 parts.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 10:04 pm Title: Secret Surprise

I guessed while reading that it was Beast. I was right, yay! LOL "You got Beast-ed" :D Heh, that's a great one! Like I said before, I love the team-ups here. Everyone is so afraid of Wolverine, heh. Must be pretty scary to know only a handfull of unproofed "facts" about him, having not even a photograph or anything else to clearly identify him. He seems to be shielded from telepaths as well. In a mass of people he could be anyone and they probably wouldn't even know it if he was standing right in front of them. Or even more scary, right behind them, heh :) Can't wait to read more! This is really, really good!

Author's Response: Yup. Got that 'Beast-ed' thing just while writing. As for Wolverine's shielding against the telepaths, have got some plans on that too. As for his secrecy in a crowd, that won't matter soon, as he will be meeting the X-Men. Wil update soon. Just have to get an update for Cleansing and Survival out of the way.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 10:02 pm Title: Fun and Games?

Hope to find out soon what's with Ro... that really got my interest. I really like who's working/connected with whom in this story. Can't wait to find out who else is with Wolvie here. But as for the one delivering the message, that only can be X23, right?

Author's Response: Yes it was X23. As for the deal with Wolvie, am starting to explain that too. As for 'Ro. That is still a mystery.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 10:01 pm Title: Da Big Easy

Woohoo, go Ro! Not only did she plant the transmitter but also let Remy steal Scott's purse, bwahaha :) No wonder he sort of opened up towards Ro with Scott pulling his bad-boy show and Jean invading his mind like that.

Author's Response: You could say that, although I had no intentions of putting either Scott or Jean down in this one. Hope to get some X-Men - Wolvie action soon.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-02-05 - 06:10 pm Title: Secret Surprise

nice chapter plz base fury in the flying fortress i always liked it better

Author's Response: I liked the fortress too. Will be using that, although may have a permanent structure for some of their activities.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 09:26 pm Title: Fun and Games?

see i think were ging to have a problem you keep writeing so many good stories but there are to many for me to keep up with i like where this is going cant wait for more

Author's Response: Well, I will try and keep my postings at a pace you can handle. Always appreciate your feedbacks!!

Reviewer: xlf Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-05 - 02:08 am Title: Da Big Easy

Yep good stuff interesting twist a pleanty. Have to see how you explain all the interesting clues.

Author's Response: Thanks XLF. Working on the next chapter right now. Should have it up, sometime today!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-25-05 - 09:04 pm Title: Da Big Easy

bloody interesting. Longest piece I've read yet from you. this paticular chapter definitely pulls you in. and I said once I'll say it again. storm should be captain. she's bloody invaluable. was able to plant a transmitter, and she of course saw Scott getting pickpocketed....pure pure class! And she was the most professional and least threatening in the bunch in her approach. She was smart, by saying you can talk out here, unlike Scott who's like let's go somewehre quite. Obviously he needs more field training. Great piece and I'm assuming the gal on the phone with Remy is Rogue, and her 'Poppuh' is Wolverine. I do wonder how Remy knew so much about the X-men and who they are..that's very interesting. I also still want to know what's up with Storm based on the first chapter. I don't know if it has anything to do with Forge or something else entirely...all in all great piece of writing..and I'm enthralled! VB

Author's Response: There is a reason for Storm not being the leader. The leader can't do covert work like any other member. He/She has to keep a public face. And who knows, maybe Scott was just distracting, giving her the time and opportunity to do what she did. As for the phone call....will be cleared soon. Storm and the first chapter.....can't reveal right now. Suffice to say, that wasn't who you think it to be.

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-25-05 - 09:23 am Title: Da Big Easy

Well now some "new" blood, this is getting interesting. Was perhaps the female voice Yukio? I must say, I am totally intrigued by what connection Remy will have with Logan, if any. Do I dare venture and say “no need to hurry the RoLo part”. For I at least will greatly enjoy the journey ahead, it seems to be able to muster up some great twist and turns. The descriptions of the characters really helps (me) when reading the story, at least in knowing what way to view them in. And to finish of , may your muses never abandon you and give you enough willpower to end all that you have started.

Author's Response: The female voice is....well, you will have to wait. As for the character description, decided to include it so that the reader might not get confused or get the wrong idea. Thanks for the encouragement.

Reviewer: 'Lobo' Jerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-25-05 - 08:59 am Title: The Beginning

Not really much to say as of yet, well I could say “yay another story to occupy my time with” and it would be true of course. First chapter did not give that much surprises but its just the beginning now so will eagerly await more.

Author's Response: I know....pretty lame start. But I thought, rather than starting with a bang, let me start by just setting the fuse. After all its a series. Takes time to build up.

Reviewer: hnyswtypie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-25-05 - 06:00 am Title: The Beginning

Kinda backwards, I know. I've got this sinking feeling that Ororo is mourning the loss of a relationship. Could it be a certain Cheyanne?

Author's Response: Replying to this first. Everything about every character will be revealed in due time. As for the Cheyanne, haven't decided yet.

Reviewer: hnyswtypie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-25-05 - 05:55 am Title: Da Big Easy

So far so good. I tfind your portrayals of the characters very interesting. Love the way you're blending the 'verses. OOOHHH that Remy is quite the mysterious one, is he not. Just what is the Wolverine up to in this one? Hmmm, I wonder. I must admit it, I'm hooked.

Author's Response: I've wanted to do such a mix up since a long time. Its true I take a lot from the comicverse to build up my movieverse characters, but this is something totally different. This time I am making an effort to include each and every....along with few lesser known ones.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-24-05 - 01:22 pm Title: The Beginning

Ohhh, a new story by BW :) And I'm already hooked! I liked how the story started out with the flow of the movie but then changed more and more into something new, yet familiar. Um, what is it Logan wanted Marie to do for the ride? Clean up his mess in the back? Heh. And what's with Ro? Can't wait to find out!

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement....I started with the movieverse starting as the Logan and Marie characters borrow their physical characteristics from that verse. As for the whole deal with them, it will all come in time, until then its more of the x-men.

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