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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-14-08 - 04:24 pm Title: Accusations

You just keep the great chapters coming. And so many great lines. The one about the pregnant women raiding the store like Vikings had me in stitches, and the one with GI Joe with a three-day pass to Barbie Woodstock. I laughed until I snorted. That takes a real gift. Good job, Bard. More tender scenes, more great dialogue, and a fantastic, tense argument.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-14-08 - 02:31 am Title: Accusations

Why do I think Forge had something to do with the Logan copy and the other woman set up? Ugh I really don't like that man.

I'm a little upset that all Logan's planning has gone to waste, but I suppose he can change the date again and they have a nice evening out.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-23-07 - 07:04 pm Title: Stumbling Blocks

Aahh, where's the rest of this chapter?! *dies*
What's Forge up to? Will Logan even return to the mansion like he just told Ro? Everything is planned so accurately, it just can't work out. LOL ;)
I wonder what's with Jean...

Reviewer: Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-23-07 - 08:24 am Title: Stumbling Blocks

This is such a beautiful written story. It is so wrong if you don't finish it.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-14-07 - 02:05 am Title: Stumbling Blocks

This is a great story please continue writing it and post againg soon.

Reviewer: Cecelia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-13-07 - 04:10 pm Title: Stumbling Blocks

Ya had ta kill me with a cliffhanger!!

I love this story more each time I read an update, kiddo. You've made Logan so lovable and it makes the reader want to root for him consistently and cheer him on. I'm still grinning from before with "Mr. Munroe." That was classic.

Forge really is up to no good, isn't he? I can't wait to see who the stranger is that was gloating along with him.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-16-07 - 07:49 pm Title: The Plot Thickens

Aw hell, what's Forge up to? Damn him. If Ro finds out about this he's so fried.

"Mr. Munroe." LOL That was great! :D

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-14-07 - 03:52 pm Title: The Plot Thickens

okay, attempt #2 to leave a review.

What is Forge up to? Why didn't Logan sense that he was there? Forge doesn't have a tracking device on Logan does he? Does he really think that any of this is going to get 'Ro back? More likely it'll just piss her off. And who did he call???

I loved the scene between Jimmy and Logan. And Logan should really know by now not to argue with Jean-Pierre lol

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-13-07 - 03:56 am Title: The Plot Thickens

Oh no!!! Leave Logan alone, you mean ol Forge!!! (aka: Kill Forge off somehow.)

Reviewer: Cecelia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-12-07 - 04:27 pm Title: The Plot Thickens

“Like you’ve got room to talk Mr. Munroe.” Man, I loved that.

I always like the warmth you write into the relationships between each character. It leaves you feeling good after you read it, kinda like a cup of cocoa. Once again, your Logan is lovable and cuddly without being a wuss. He would have been within his rights to clean the floor with Forge after that punch in the testicles. Good work, 'Bard.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-04-07 - 03:34 pm Title: The Cat's Out of the Bag

okay it took me a couple days, but I finally read this entire story! So many times through it I wanted to grab Remy and shake some sense into him, but things seem to be going well now. I'm so glad 'Ro finally told Forge and I hope he really does back off. I can't wait to see what happens next! I have so much I could say about everything I loved about this story, what made me laugh or almost cry but I think that would be a very, very long review to read lol Just know there's so much I love about it!

Reviewer: CeeCee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-23-07 - 03:43 pm Title: The Cat's Out of the Bag

I always enjoy updates to this story. The blend of humor and Ororo's heartfelt speech was powerful and easy to read. I empathized with every character in this chapter, including Forge. Logan accusing Ororo of pinching his butt was cute.

I like that Ororo didn't stand there and yell at Forge or say anything particularly castrating. Even when she called Logan the best lover she ever had, she didn't insult Forge in that regard. It made her seem like the bigger person. Good work.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-23-07 - 12:03 pm Title: The Cat's Out of the Bag

Yes! Finally Ro told him, rubbing it in deep! :D Gads, I'd have snapped too with that dude following me around wherever I was going.
Loved the RoLo fun here, chasing each other to the Danger Room. That was cute.
Are Remy, Scott and Logan done with playing tricks on Forge yet? LOL

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-21-07 - 10:58 pm Title: The Cat's Out of the Bag

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-07 - 06:36 pm Title: Circling the Wagons

I had this story printed out since that's the only way for me to get my RoLo fix at the moment, and spent the last couple of days reading it. I'm really enjoying it! :D
They are so cute together. I really like that nothing and no one can come between them. They talk about everything and face problems together. I loved how Ro proved to him that he would never hurt her, that was great!
I'm glad Remy finally accepted Logan as Ro's choice of man in her life. Albeit reluctantly LOL But hey, Forge is back, they need to team up against him :) Can't wait to find out what they have in store for him. The men's night out was hilarious! Logan really can't do subtle. LOL

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