Date: 01-09-06 - 08:05 am Title: Chapter Seven
Whhaaa! Not him again. And now he's talking. To her! Ugh.
"I’ll try to control my waiting heart." Oh my dear... *rolls her eyes*
He only sees her as a goddess... and as a queen. What about the woman? What about the X-Man? What about just Ro? He's reducing her to what he can handle. What he'd like her to be.
Yeah, he's the best at what he does! There ya have it, Panther. That's Logan! The best!
She... she made her decision? Why oh why am I so afraid to find out about it all out of a sudden?
Date: 01-02-06 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter Seven
*chuckle* Trust me, I get why you don't wanna spend too much time on that loser & 'Ro, but like you said, the chap. had to get done. I actually liked this method for this chapter. All the emotions were subtle when they needed to be, and clearly brought out in the way things were said; you didn't need too much (if any) narration. It was impactful just the way you wrote it. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks. Had to get the 'lesser' character some time too!!