That was intense, detailed, almost academic in its scope and it left me shaken. Good work. Excellent work.

I've missed your stories, kiddo, and once again you've proven why. I loved Vic in this chapter and Logan's reactions to him.

Author's Response: Thanks Cee! I've been so nervous about this chapter an' I think it's why it took me 21 mos to get it posted. A LOT of research went into it and tryin' to blend the academic nuance with the personal interactions was like balancing on a high wire. Wanting it to be as exacting as possible and not lose those personal moments.... I'm glad you're liking Victor in this. Now that I got this chapter out there finally I can't wait to get on with the rest of the story. Thanks for the support and kind words! It means a lot to me right now. - W6C

Yeah, I have to admit that I read this story so often it's ridiculous - hey, you know a great present to everyone for the holidays would be another chapter right? Hey they say if you don't ask you never receive. Thanks for such a great fic.

Author's Response: Christina, Thanks so much for taking the time to leave your comments and I'm glad you continue to enjoy "Eye" as much as I've enjoyed writing it. As stated last year, I do have large parts of Ch 30 written out and only hoping to finish up a few other projects so I can return focus to this one. Truly hopin' it wont take more months, but perhaps only weeks to get this out to you. Thanks to everyone for your patience, above and beyond. - W6C

Author's Response: I just wanted to let everyone know who is still interested that I'm working hard on chapter 30. Hopefully my muses will stay strong and real life will cut me a break here. Looks good so far. -- W6C

Hmm…how do I follow up my last review….
This was a very intense chapter and its not just because of the thorough information that was given to us. But because of what the information means. As always you are concise and able to bring these characters to life. I don’t know what scares me more Dr. Maier or what this chapter means for the overall story.

Victor. Unlike the feral, ‘second-rate Wolverine’ that many author s has fixed him as. You have made him into in-depth character with purpose. His history with Wolverine is very believable and more interesting than the ‘father-son’ dynamic that has been shown before.

Every chapter you write is the worth the wait, no matter how long it takes. Loved this story from the beginning, can’t wait to read ‘The Pursuit of Weapon X’




Author's Response: Wow, what a fantastic review. Thank you for such in-depth feedback, it's always great to hear what the readers are thinkin' about when they read a story/chapter. I was really hoping that those very things would stick with you. Not only the eeriness of Maier's perspective on the situation, but precisely what this chapter does mean for the overall story. Events will be taking place in future chapters and I won't be able to explain the "why's" while it's happening. So I needed this chapter to explain, so it can be used as reference again if needed because too many other things will need to be focused on without bein' interrupted by such indepth explanations. Victor... well, I've been waitin' decades for someone at Marvel to show a few more layers to this character and was always left wanting.... much like the RoLo connection we've all been waiting hopefully for. I hope to show him as a more interesting dynamic, a more layered "onion", as most of us are. Thank you for the wonderful review and feedback Roxxi. I hope the comin' chapters wont disappoint. --- W6C

Youre back! Thankyou for the new chapter. I gotta wrap my brain around all the details, but what of Ororo and Logan? Great stuff here, and I feel the need to read more.

Author's Response: I am back, yes. *smiles* Yep, this chapter is information heavy that's for sure. This is one of those "for future reference" chapters. I needed these details in order to set you up for some heart-rending scenes comin' up. Hope you stay with us as we come closer to the conclusion of this long saga. Thanks for the feedback, Lovy --- W6C

Always detailed and always entertaining! Not only do the clinical descriptions and the philosophy make this more real - and chilling - but the story references were easy to recognize. And I can see why you incorporated them, too. I LOVED the Sabertooth miniseries back in the day, and I think Marvel cheerfully forgot that they printed it, judging by the horrid storylines with Vic now. It's funny, because looking back on how Logan behaved when he went feral in the early chapters of this story, it now reminds me of how Vic acted in those Xmen issues after Logan popped a claw into his brain.

I'm so glad that you updated this. Tangible, in-depth storytelling that we've come to expect from you, buddy.

Author's Response: Thanks so much CeeCee. I love it when a reader recognizes the "easter eggs" I drop into the story. *grins* Funny, I never made the connection between Creed's childlike mentality way back when to Logan's feral childlike behavior. But I can definitely see the resemblance of the two. Thanks for pointin' that out. Thanks also for the very nice critique, your support is always appreciated. --- W6C

I'm so pleased I checked up on this story today and discovered it updated. Incorporating Wolverine 32 into the plot has given the story an even more sinister turn and I'm really enjoying where it's going. Can't wait for the next update. Hope it comes soon.

Thanks for the great read. :0)

Author's Response: Now there's a fan! You even knew the issue/title number, that's awesome. I'm really glad yer enjoyin' the story thus far. The next chapter just needs some cleanin' up an' straightenin' out then it'll be posted. Thanks for stickin' with me on this, Rhia, and thanks for the kick in the @$$ to get me back on track too. --- W6C

Author's Response: UPDATE!! -- Chapter 29 has 7 pages completed.

Welcome back W6C!! So refreshing to read... I eagerly await more!

Author's Response: Well thanks very much, Ashley. It's certainly good to BE back. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, the next is already on it's way through the first draft. Hopefully it wont be long before postin'. Thanks for the shout. --- W6C