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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-07 - 12:50 am Title: Ch. 27 (At Death's Door, part 1)

Holy winged nutcase, W6C! Warren completely shocked me! That was very well done. Warren's detached, calm, cool, collected bearing was excellent. Now, are we going to have to wait a whole year for the next chapter - and more RoLo, btw? ;D You know I'm not coming down on you, it's always worth waiting for these updates, problem is the chapter was way too short! Like a spoonful of water after we've been stranded in the heart of Modor for a week!

Author's Response: LOLOL! holy winged nutcase? lolol No you wont have to wait another year for the next chapter. I think, the first 26 chapters were just so intense to write that I needed a hiatus to recover from it an' get clear headed again. I'm ready an' raring to go for the rest of the way now. Thanks for the comments lolol Darlin --- W6C

Reviewer: fel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-07 - 10:58 pm Title: Ch. 27 (At Death's Door, part 1)

this is mad, do u know how many time i have read your fanfic waiting for the next chapter? having got this chapter at last, i not sure whether i am happy or not since, i expect it will several more month before your write another?! though i understand the demands of life, it is right to say that i dont care, because at this moment i am just another demanding fan requesting another chapter or rather chapters

Author's Response: I'm sorry it took so long for this chapter, Fel. I am however already workin' on the next chapter. I'm certainly hopin' it wont take months to get posted. I know real life can get maddening when there's somethin' you want to get done, believe me I know. Hopefully the next chapter will be up in a few weeks. Thanks for the feedback!--- W6C

Reviewer: Roxxibebe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-07 - 02:10 am Title: Ch. 27 (At Death's Door, part 1)

I had a silly grin on my face when I saw this on the Realm. You know I’ve been waiting forever for this and as usual you delivered.

Warren, Warren, Warren…I was completely shocked, of course you gave hints earlier about his hatred against Wolverine. But I never thought to this extent. Linking Warren with Sabertooth and everything else slowly brings things together, from point A to point B.

I’m just in too much shock to write a better review. I loved it, I’m so happy your back and hopefully the next time you update I can come up with an better review.

- Roxxi

Author's Response: It's great to be back, Roxxi. The next chapter will bring more truths into the light for all to see. Thanks for the feedback! -- W6C

Reviewer: Echo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-19-07 - 02:51 am Title: Ch. 27 (At Death's Door, part 1)

O...M...G..!!

It's a happy B-Day indeed, W6C!!! Yippeee!!! Eye is back! And such intrigue!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! (*doing somersaults*)

Author's Response: *smiles, watchin' her do somersaults* Happy Birthday Echo!! I'm glad yer intrigued, but just wait... it gets better. *chuckles* --- W6C

Reviewer: rory Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-19-07 - 01:03 am Title: Ch. 27 (At Death's Door, part 1)

what is up with Angel?! Has he gone crazy or something?! And why now does Sabertooth want to help Wolverine? I'm all confused! Great story though!


Author's Response: Oh you must have missed the part where Sabretooth said "he'd fooled everyone for decades"... I'm sorta glad yer confused though, cuz I havent revealed all of the secrets an' intruiging stuff yet. lol I'm glad you like it though. Thanks for the FB --- W6C

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 11:27 pm Title: Ch. 27 (At Death's Door, part 1)

YES! Its here. Greatness as usual. Angel as a scary dark silent killer....ooooh. Look out below. Sabertooth trying to help?!

I'm am hooked. I just don't want to be hooked for like another six months =D

*slowly backs away*

Author's Response: I promise you won't have to wait six months. Already workin' on the next chapter. There's more secrets to be revealed yet... Thanks for the feedback Reiko. I'm glad you were pleased. Got ya' wonderin' about Creed though huh? *grins* --- W6C

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-07 - 10:24 pm Title: Ch. 27 (At Death's Door, part 1)

On the one hand, I never saw that coming, but on the other hand, it makes perfect sense. I love this, but I'm afraid if I say "it's worth the wait!" you'll take a hiatus from it and my kids will be grown and in college before you give us another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

As usual, great dialogue, suspenseful plot twist, great reactions from the characters, and Warren is downright creepy. I normally feel lukewarm about him as a hero, but you made him a great villain.

More, please! (holding out my porridge bowl like Oliver Twist)

Author's Response: That made my day. I was hopin' nobody would suspect, but once it was revealed it would make sense accordin' to past events regarding his character. Thanks for the wonderful review, and I promise you, I'm already draftin' out the next chapter and you won't have to wait too long for this one. My haitus is over. *fills her bowl to hold her over* Thanks CeeCee! --- W6C

Reviewer: Artist1328 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-01-07 - 09:34 am Title: Ch. 26 - Acts of Vengeance, pt 6

So happy to see this story at this site. Long hoped that I'd find it again on the web. Disappointed no new chapters since last I saw it, but still happy it is here. It is a masterpiece that I hope will be finished ...whenever. Just don't abandon it to the incomplete zone to never see updates again.
So touched by the wonder of it all. Great writing should be praised.

Author's Response: Thanks very much, Artist. I assure you that it won't be abandoned to the incomplete story zone. I have the next chapter started... actually it's had 5 pages complete for a lonnnng time now. Real life reared its ugly head and got in my way an' then it took forever to really get my focus back. I got 5 pages done, and have been workin' on it intermittently as events allow. I appreciate you takin' the time to leave your feedback and I really hope to have Ch. 27 up soon. Thanks again. --- W6C

Author's Response: Oops, sorry, typo. Not 5 pages.. it has 8 pages fully complete. --- W6C

Reviewer: N'Dare's Daughter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 01:17 am Title: Ch. 26 - Acts of Vengeance, pt 6

I am soooo looking forward to an update! Soon? Please? *watery puppy dog eyes*

Author's Response: *chuckles* I swear the fates don't want this story to end... I've had more disruptions just tryin' to get Ch. 27 finished than I did for all the previous 26 put together. It IS still my focus though... STILL workin' on it. Hang in there. Better yet, maybe you all could light candles or somethin' to ward off the "incomplete stories negative spirits" *grins* Any assistance would be most appreciated. - W6C

Reviewer: RhiannonUK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-06 - 08:06 am Title: Ch. 26 - Acts of Vengeance, pt 6

Excellent news! I'll be looking out for it!

Author's Response: *smiles* We're gettin' closer! Soon! --- W6C

Reviewer: RhiannonUK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-13-06 - 07:35 am Title: Ch. 26 - Acts of Vengeance, pt 6

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Author's Response: *grins*.... Ch. 27 has 8 pages now, we're gettin' there. --- W6C

Reviewer: RhiannonUK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-10-06 - 09:49 am Title: Ch. 26 - Acts of Vengeance, pt 6

It's so long since this fic was updated I hope it hasn't been abandoned. If ever a fic deserved to reach its conclusion it's this one.

I like the way you portray Logan, how you explore the darker half of him. Ororo's empathy is really well realised, her love and her strength remain consistent.

Please return to this fic and update. You owe it not only to your readers but to yourself and the characters in the story. Don't leave all those untied threads flapping helplessly in the wind.

Rhia

Author's Response: I assure you again, and am happy to do so, this story has not been abandoned. This story is years in the making, I couldn't just let it lie incomplete. I think you'll really enjoy the next chapters that lead us to the conclusion. If you liked what you've read so far, you really don't wanna miss how it turns out. I really appreciate all your very kind words. You've really helped kick my muse in gear again. Many thanks. --- W6C

Reviewer: RhiannonUK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-10-06 - 08:21 am Title: Ch. 24 - Acts of Vengeance, pt 4

This part of the story, since the ambush, has really close parallels with a fic I wrote a few months ago. I wanted to explore what would happen should Logan's healing factor fail. I find it interesting to see how you approached this, how you interpret the reactions of his friends, his team mates. The marked difference is, you have written this from the point of view of others while I wrote a first hand account from Logan's POV. Your version is no less harrowing and you've tackles the situation with aplomb. Frankly I don't undertand why this chapter has gone uncommented.

Author's Response: Neither do I *shrugs with a grin* But I'm certainly glad that you took the time to comment on it. I'd love to read your story. I'll have to look for it. Thanks for the comparison and the nice feedback. -- W6C

Reviewer: RhiannonUK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-09-06 - 07:04 pm Title: Ch. 22 - Acts of Vengeance, pt 2

I think I wanna cry too.

Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry. Or maybe not. *grin* That's a great compliment. Any reaction an author can elicit from a reader is a good one. Thanks so much. -- W6C

Reviewer: RhiannonUK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-09-06 - 06:34 pm Title: Ch. 21 - Acts of Vengeance, pt 1

Whoa! I love claw on claw action between Logan and Sabes but this was brutal. Edge of seat stuff. I'm impressed.

Author's Response: *grin* Thank you! And I held back quite a bit on what I really wanted to do... gonna save the real brutal stuff for later chapters. *grin* -- W6C

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