You have written each character with a consistency to that is unparalleled. I so envy your gift, now with that said on to the next chapter.

i just want to say I think you are amazing. I usually skim fanfics and pick out the best parts, but your writing the style, the fact that you actually proofread and structure your stories with pride and caring, has me drinking up every single word. This by far, is the best story I've read on this site. I am an addict. One of the best RoLo fics, ever and I've read a few. Continue to write them puhlease.

Jesus, WOMAN! i took notes, but it seems i said the same thing over and over. I LOVED IT! but let's be specific about what i loved :) From beginning to near end, i laughed. This was one hell of a funny chapter! All the playful banter, like "Scooter a Masochist?" "hardly"... and that "pussy" comment. Ali and Colossus... Ali and Logan in the War Room. Hil-fucking-larious!

Secondly, there is a lot more hinting of things to come. But of course you'd only know if you knew what to look for (I feel special!!! Reaaaaaaaaal Special)

Thirdly, the biggest change, killing off Gumbo. Whoa! Bold incorporation being that he was alive before and played an integral part. This shall be interesting to say the least, with what happens next.