[Report This]Date: 07-07-06 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter 4
I think you're a great writer, but I just plain don't get the appeal of the brutal sex between Ororo and Logan. I don't think I've come across one story where sex between them wasn't violent.
Author's Response: Winds of Change. There is a lot of gentle tender loving in Winds. I think the appeal is the very basic nature of Storm and Wolverine, both are primal and both are forceful. Bring them together and expecting slow sweet anything is a bit out of character, at least for me. I've read them for 15 years and it's what drew me. The core of each is raw and honorable and borderline animal. I like that so I use it, I don't know about other authors, but that's me. :D Hope that helped.
[Report This]Date: 01-08-06 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
A cabin! I really like that! Especially what happened after Ro noticed the bed LOL. Hot and intense. Loved her inner battle and not wanting him to stop :)
And he actually marked her, wow! Does he know what just happened?
Aww, poor exhausted Ro just passed out on the floor. And he just went up and left? Ts... He must be in trance or shock or something. At least I hope so. Because if not he really needs his sexy ass kicked for that kind of behaviour.
I wonder what he will do when he enters the room again seeing her like that... hope to find out in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12-31-05 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
I hope I'm not too late to write a review but here goes. I would not say sexual scene was violent but it was aggresive. I like that you did not hold back and Ororo is type of woman who gives and good she can take. I do believe that Ororo is going to take Logan for wild and bump ride. At least Logan was finish with her. He pick Storm off the floor and clean her up. Windrider please make this as rough over the top and as shocking you can get it. Hey we all adore you... so go for it girl!!!!!
Author's Response: Never too late for reviews!! And with encouragement like that... ::grins:: I am just letting it flow. I have no real direction, just a general idea of where I want this story to go...so who knows what kinda ride we're in for. LOL
[Report This]Date: 12-26-05 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
that was disturbing, it was tredding a thin line between an erotic scene and a rape. i am not sure i appreciated the scene and i wonder what storm's reaction will be to it. i actually like the way their physical relationship started in the first version. it was more tender still a little violent but not as brutal.
Author's Response: Well, that scene was meant to tread a line, but not between rape and erotic. The line between sex and violence is often a thin one, especially where excessive passion is concerned, and that's the line I wanted to push. Make no mistake, she gave consent, I made certain that was in there. ;) The emotional toll is where the real aftermath will be, as the physical--though aggressive-- was consentual. But rest assured there is a reason behind the change in scene, as it leads me to the developments of the next chapter, which I hope you enjoy.
[Report This]Date: 12-25-05 - 03:15 am Title: Chapter 4
I swear I am beyond conflicted right now. The first half was great banter and tormenting as usual. their animosity is great and refreshing 'cause it hasn't been overdone (especially not like this)
but my conflicting emotion comes in the second half. Hot as usual!!! it was gut wrenching. it was funny how one second they're arguing as usual, and the next they notice the bed and they're fucking fervently. one part of me is saying that was real quick, the other part is saying HELL YEAH.
but then at the end i feel so bad for Ororo. He gets up to go to what could possibly be the bathroom and she is laying there ON THE FLOOR in tears torn, both literally and not.
WOW, it is time for bed. Well done.
Author's Response: Have faith, chica. There is method to my madness.
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