Awww, he cleaned her up. That's so sweet. I'm liking this a lot!
Heh, both don't want to have those feelings and acutally told each other :)
He read her journal! I can't believe it! *shakes her head* But her last entry was intense. Good thing he knows what she feels. But he did read her journal!
It's nice they talk openly about their feelings here. Both unsure about what's happening, but willing to find out, because it just feels too good not to, heh ;)

Okay.... So as i've told previously... I LOOOOOOOOOVE LOOOOVE LOOOOOOVE LOVE IT!!!! You already know i'm jealous of ya! :D Ya know why i love it too!

Author's Response: I know why....because I pay you. :P

As usual, awesome. I'm just going along with the ride because you always produce complex and quality type work. Again, I love the characterizations of both Ororo and Logan, there is that sum of their parts that makes sense and is plausible in their universe and it makes the story that much more enjoyable because as a reader you come across a passage or a scene thinking, "Hmm, I could see that", or "Yeah, that's so Logan or Ororo". Great stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review Nikki. It is seriously much appreciated. ::Muah!:: I like a seemingly simple story with surprising depth, so you just gave me a VERY nice compliment!! More soon, and again, thank you for the encouragement! always welcome and most appreciated.