[Report This]Date: 01-09-06 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
whoa. i've been gone WAY too long. i finally get back to fics, and if you've completely spun this one around! i love the new path you're taking! i love the last one, too, but i think everything in this one is a little better connected. know what i mean? can't wait for the next one. hope everything's going well for ya :D
Author's Response: Charmer!! You delightfully mysterious bitch, where the hell have you been? LOL. MISSED YOU!!
[Report This]Date: 01-08-06 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG, he raped her!!! Creed actually dared to touch the Wolverine's chosen mate! Now he's hamburger meat! Oh wait, that has already been taken care of, heh.
Uhm... wow. At least "no fluids", to quote Jean. But still. Whoa. I wonder how both of them will handle this situation.
"I'm sorry I'm not stronger." - I really hope Ro doesn't blame herself for what happened!
Glad to see Logan sitting by her side, keeping her safe.
Author's Response: Hey Steph!! Glad to see you back. :D Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to review as you read--means the world, seriously!! So, thank you. How both of them handle this situation will be important in their development as a couple. Deep issues will be touched on in KC, but they are not the primary focus of this story. The dark events that happen in life are often the catalysts for self-revelations and brighter things, so I plan to use them as such in my story. Glad you're enjoying the ride. more really soon!
[Report This]Date: 01-03-06 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
That is really, really good. I read your original story, however, this one far surpasses that one in both character development and detail. These characters are very similar to the personabilities depicted in their original comic appearances. This is a story that I check for updates almost every day.
Nice job!
Author's Response: Hope to have an update up today, so be on the lookout. Thank you so much-sincerely, I can't say that enough- for the encouraging reviews. I must admit when I decided to pull the original because I didn't like where it was, I wondered how the second version would be received. Reviews like this make me glad I went with my gut.
[Report This]Date: 01-03-06 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
You! You! Now you're gonna make us wait for the next chapter. Well you already know i loved this one, so uh...please write the next one soon!
Author's Response: Next one soon, Panther. ;) I'm glad you approve. Talk to you soon!
[Report This]Date: 01-03-06 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter 6
Great writing! I almost teared up at the end when Logan was talking to Jean about Ro's condition. I'm glad that's the end of Creed, or is it? I just hope Ro can find a way to deal with this and I hope Logan can forgive himself. Once again, great chapter!
Author's Response: Much thanks for the encouraging review. I must admit I was curious as to how people would react to Ro's rape at the hands of Logan's mortal enemy. This wasn't just tossed in for shock value, it will be a key element throughout the story, so once again, thank you for the kind words, and inspiration to keep at it. :D
[Report This]Date: 01-02-06 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
Deep. I am a spoiler freak so I sometimes like to read a bit of the beginning, and then the ending, but I went straight through and you didn't disappoint. It's to the point that I vaguely remember the original draft. Victor's presence was dramatic and traumatic, and Ororo's thoughts about Logan in her time of need were very interesting as was Logan's final realization towards Ororo. Great stuff. I'll probably be repeating that a lot.
Author's Response: Repeat it as often as you like, LOL. It only makes me want to drop everything and write the next installment. Ororo's thoughts are actually very important to some key emotional elements and some plot developments in the next few chapters. Good eye. ;)
Date: 01-02-06 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
You HAD to get her raped....didn't you. Couldn't have settled on a lightening strike 'slam-bang' on his balls, huh!! Well....what's with the retreat into the dark deal?
Author's Response: Yes, BW, my sole purpose in life is to write Ororo getting raped...It was a primal need, a fundemental must have that I just couldn't live without. *sigh* Sarcasm aside, to answer your statement, No a simple slam-bang on the balls would not suffice for the story I am now writing. Before, yes, sure, but no longer. This is only the tip of a very large, very complex iceberg. Her reteating into the dark is simply her retreating deeper into herself. What that implies...well, you'll just have to read and find out, won't you.
[Report This]Date: 01-02-06 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
*jaw drop* i'll have a better response at a later date. excuse me. *walks away stunned*
Author's Response: yer excused. ;) But come back soon. lol. (like I could get rid of ya, right?)
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