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Reviewer: jacpin2002 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-16 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter seven

This is my first review being left on this site. This chapter was everything. Wow. Just wow.

Reviewer: Dani Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter seven

I had to reread this chapter 3 times... That was the deepest stuff i've ever read. And, ok, you made me cry. "You're still a good man," That was just about the most beautiful thing right there.

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter seven

Okay now I'm about to cry. Who knew Wolvie could have such a tender side after all that animal sex a few chapters ago? Ro is way lucky to have him and more importantly Woivie is lucky to have her. They so need each other.

I don't know why the movies couldn't go in this direction instead of harping over that prissy Jean character. She is not even all of that. You are fabulous, even if I'm writing this late.

Author's Response: **bows** Wow, thanks so much! **Basks in own fabulousness** Hee hee. Seriously, though, thank you! I appreciate teh review and the feedback!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-12-06 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter seven

*clamps jaw shut* I don't think i can utter anything besides OMG right now. That was...that was...the most beautifull chapter i have ever read...Ever...the feeling...and ...and...i cried...with them...That was...powerfull...and ....and it just captured you and sucks you righ in...and...and i could picture every moment...feel what they felt...i love it would be the understatement of the century....

Author's Response: Awwww, thanks Panther. Your enthusiasm always means so very much to me!! I sincerely mean that. You've been a supporter since the beginning and I love ya for it!! More really soon.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-12-06 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter seven

i didnt mean to say the story was soft i meant wolverine was coming off as a laittle softer this time

and im doind pretty good been goin through alot of drama at work so havent had much time to read how you?

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-06 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter seven

this seems to be coming off as alot softer of an interraction alought not the origanal i like it post more

Author's Response: It is a bit more emotionally in depth than the original version--I don't know about softer, but definitely more involved. I'm glad you like the revamp, stranger. How the hell are ya btw?

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-06 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter seven

“Ya ever think maybe I need you?” - I think I lost it there. This line is just awesome! And then the part where he showed her that he was crying, too... Perfect! So deep, so full of emotions!
Absolutely loved that last part of this chap. It actually erased everything from my mind I wanted to say about the parts before that, heh... *sniffs*

Author's Response: Awwwww. *hands tissue* That line was unexpected, I just wrote in the moment and it came out, and it fit. I could see Logan grudgingly growling that out. I enjoy a good emotionally driven story, and I'm thrilled you're liking it too! *grins*

Reviewer: Lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-06 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter seven

Okay damn it. . . you made me cry. You are writing the absolutely sh-t out of this piece. Keep it up. . . you've got to finish it.



Author's Response: *hands tissue* Note to self: Buy more tissue. Thank you! Don't worry Kingdom Come has a ways to go before it is finished. I'm happy to see you're emotionally involved with the story!! With reviews like this I just want to drop everything and write!!

Reviewer: Nikki Dai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-06 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter seven

Damn. There isn't much for me to say here. The emotional depth and range made this my favorite chapter. You're able to touch down to the core and take a sliver of each character and magnify it out and I have to thank you so much because it makes the story that much more enjoyable but the reveal for both Ororo and Logan in this journey as well. I thoroughly loved this chapter and I will have to read it a few more times just to get other aspects I know I may have missed. Great stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you very much *beams with pleasure*. I'm glad you pointed out emotional depth and range, because that was what I felt was missing from the original start of this story. I'm so happy the difference is noticable! Much more coming up! Thank you so much for taking the time to review, I can't tell you enough how much I appreciate that! Later!!

Reviewer: hnyswtypie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-06 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter seven

The end of this chapter was absolutely beautiful. From the moment Logan brought Ro's hands to his face, I have been on the verge of tears. This is an amazing fic, and I can't wait for the next installment.

Author's Response: Praise from a fellow author is always the most warming! Thank you so much! More soon.

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-06 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter seven

...ya know...my roommate probably thinks i'm crazy. i'm sitting here, off in my own little KC world, chuckling every once in a while, near growling at one point (a small one escaped during the logan/prof/jean/scott scene), and then logan goes and says "ya ever think maybe i need you" and i lose all composure. i made an odd sort of hiccup/grunt thingy and then just cried. and i don't mean some tears, i mean full blown sobbing. so thanks. ;) ::tips hat:: darlin' :D

Author's Response: Awww, sweetie. *Hugs! Backs up and grimaces at snot stain on shoulder* I'd apologize for making you cry, but again, we'd both know it was an insincere load of Pffffft. I love that you get so involved with the characters and story! I have sorely missed your reviews. As one of my primary Muses, you are needed! LOL. Thank you again, Charmer! Much love, chica!

Reviewer: Randi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-10-06 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter seven

damn, why you have to go and make me cry like that huh? That was deep, i simply loved it, update soon.

Author's Response: *tissue* I'm glad you cried. I know that sounds mean, but ehn, it's true. That means you care about these characters, and that is INSANELY flattering! Thank you!

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-10-06 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter seven

turn on the waterworks why dont ya? *sniffle* oh man that was angsty

Author's Response: LOL. Awwww. Thank you!! More soon. *need a tissue?*

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-10-06 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter seven

you know some times you make me real mad!!! only becuase you make me feel what i do't want to. One minute i'm signing. Poor Ro. Damn that creed and then i'm Laughing hysterically. That whole Ali, Ororo scene. (Any scene i write with Ro and Ali, will pale in comparison!!!) and then i am damn near tears with the last part.

Author's Response: Damn near? SONUVABITCH, what do I gotta do to make you cry?? LOL. Just kiddin'. (sort of). I love Ali and Ro so there will be more of them--can't not have 'em. LOL.

Reviewer: elanda1973 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-10-06 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter seven

Jesus! To say that chapter was DEEP would be an understatement! I'm glad they both know it wasn't anyone's fault as to what happened! Two of the strongest X-Men comforting each other, who would have thought? You made me feel Ro's physical and emotional pain! I can't wait for the next chapter! Damn, you're good Hobbins!

Author's Response: *bows* Aw, El, I love you. You always fill me with the warm fuzzies...or is that gas? Either way, I love it!! LOL. Talk to you soon!

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