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Reviewer: hnyswtypie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 10

Loved the girl-talk between Ali and Ro. There's something about the way you write the relationship between these two that is just...right.

[i]“I think I’m falling in love with you, Ororo.”[/i]

I just about melted!

Author's Response: I would've if he'd said that to me! ;) Ali and Ro are great together!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 10

No that is not a problem! Not a problem at all!

*gives fan back to charmer* Thanks, it came in handy!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 10

Do Storm an' Wolvie do anything else in this story? I mean besides sex. ;) Very nice chapter! I wonder how deep Jean can blush when she picks up thoughts from Storm or Wolvie about what happened. :D

Author's Response: Uhm, no. They won't do anything else. Will that be a prolem? LOL. More soon, Panther!!

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 10

damn. where do i begin?

You know what i'm going to say first, but here it is anyway: I LOVE ALI/RO!!! You give them the best relationship in the world (written or drawn)!

Next, Mmmm... Ro in a great ged-up and Lo unabashedly nakey YUMMY!!! etc...

The end was sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks, Muse. Ali and Ro are fun. Logan = Yummy. Period. LOL.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 10

Two words: Ro and Ali :D
LOL! Those two together, just priceless!
Ugh, what's with Jean? Showing some jealousy or what? *rolls eyes*
Loved it when Ro came out of her bathroom to find Logan already naked and sprawled on her bed. That's a nice picture actually... mmhh yum :D
Aww, and he finally talks about love. Too bad Ro didn't hear his sweet comment...
I'm looking forward to whatever might come next, heh :)

Author's Response: I love Ali/Ro moments. Jean is a tad green about the situation...what that means for Ororo and Logan is too soon to tell... Yes, Logan naked on a bed is a delicious picture. One I want framed and mounted on my ceiling above my bed. **sigh** More soon, Steph, and as always warm thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter 10

Once again. . .you have written a beautiful addition to this piece. This time around it feels as if the characters are much more thoughtful and 'true to form'. The hot and the touching mix seamlessly. Keep up the fantastic writing.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review, and you're right. Not only are the characters more true to form, but my writing style is once again my own, instead of me trying to write like someone I ain't, LOL. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I sincerely can't say that enough. My inspiration is directly related to reviews, so I thank you for the fuel for the fire!

Reviewer: serial_charmer Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter 10

hol!! this was fantastic!! just...exquisite! BP, im gonna need that fan back! until then... ::faints::

Author's Response: LMAO. **pours icy water over Charmers head and runs away**

Reviewer: LaydeRogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 03:56 am Title: Chapter 10

I've been itchin' for a KC update and i'm glad i finally got it. This chapter was a great end to a good weekend. Of course i'm looking forward to the Windrider1 specialty twist and turns you lay down hard in all of your fics. I can't wait to see what delicously wicked ideas you have for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I have some seriously wicked ideas for this story, so hold on tight. LOL. I'm itching for an Angel with Scabbed Wings update...you gonna scratch that for me or what?

Reviewer: elanda1973 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter 10

Holy shit! I think I may have soiled myself reading this chapter! Jesus fucking christ! Where in the hell do you come up with these absolutely fabulous combination of words that make me feel elated,depressed and aroused all at the same time? I love you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much Hobbins and your talent is ENDLESS and PRECIOUS! I know I haven't reviewed as much as I used to but then again having a direct phone line to your house doesn't help either but know this: YOU ARE ONE TALENTED FUCKING WOMAN AND I AM JUST ONE OF THE MANY WHO HAVE THE LUCK OF BEING ABLE TO READ YOUR STORIES! Write on Windrider!, write on!

Author's Response: You are soooooooooo good for my ego, El. Seriously, LOL. I like the phone calls way more than the reviews, anyways, babe so no worries. I do however appreciate them tremendously!! More soon, Elanda, More soon.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 03:39 am Title: Chapter 10

Scooter will be...Mr. Brother...for always. Its a wonder he even gets on with Jean. (As is clear by the lastest Ult. X-Men issue #66)

Looking forward to the next update.....and whatever 'wicked comes this way'. Definitely progressing faster than the last (first) time.

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