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Reviewer: Felicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-06 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter thirteen

how are they going to get out of their situation u should make them join magneto right now he seems way better than charles write more soon

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-26-06 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter thirteen

Ahhhh love :D And he finally said it! Right out of the blue, surprising even himself *sigh* Perfect, just perfect!
I'm really glad they talked about everything, meaning the Jean-incident... Maybe Ro should have a word with Red though. Telling her "Stay away from my man. ... or else!" :D
Loved how Ro spoke up against Fury so Logan had to hold her back when it's normally the other way around, heh. I love to see her like that! :D
And then the elevator! OMG! :D *grabs pencil & paper* Where to start, where to start, gah! *runs around in circles* Stop putting all those delicious scenes in my head! ... no WAIT! Don't! Don't stop!! LOL
Weee, RoLo! I love this! :D

Reviewer: Raeyna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-25-06 - 01:43 pm Title: Chapter thirteen

Huh? What's that I hear? *puts hand to ear*
*suddenly, a mysterious voice speaks* "If you write more chapters, more reviews will come...."
Hey, what was that? *looks around and finds no one* Dunno who it was but what it did say does sound like good advice (especially to a certain review whore). * ;P ;P nudge, nudge*

When I first read this chapter, I was in the school library. You do NOT know how hard it was for me to restrain myself from throwing my arms up in the air and shouting HALLELUJAH, THEY'RE TOGETHER!! WHOOO!

This chapter I think has become one of my favorites. It threw me for a loop, especially because it was a chapter I was dreading and hoping for at the same time because of cliffhanger you left me with previously. I thought 'oh no, the dreaded talk about Jean and the kiss.' But you handled the chapter beautifully. You'd have this emotionally charged moment that would take an abrubpt turn into brief levity, and the transition between the two was just flawless. That takes talent, which you have in bundles. The teasing that went on between the two couldn't have been more better timed. Like when he says the 'three little words' right out of the blue (well, not completely cuz they just did the nastehh, but romantic nonetheless), a serious moment, and then says he's starved and calls her a wench not ten seconds later. Or the part right after the conference when he tells her he likes her sassy. Then there was the 'are ya stupid' part and the part where he asks her if she got knocked on the head. Although those two parts could be catagorized more as 'duh!' moments. Still, I found them funny during not funny moments (i.e. when talking about Jean). There were two other parts that were memorable. Who knew Wolvie could pinkie swear, let alone know what it was? And when Ro was like 'oh, do shut up,' all prim and proper (at least it seemed like it to me). IMO, that's just classic Ro.

But this chapter, oh so amazingly, and tastefully written, not to mention HOOOOOOT *fans self*. And they're TOGETHER! *squeals*. I'm so giddy from it, I think I need a straight jacket just to keep myself together. Did I mention I was a die hard RoLo fan?

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-06 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter thirteen

so... she pregnant?

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-06 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter thirteen

horray it's updated! keep up the ood work! Your stories always leave me in bad need of a cold shower and grasping a knotted kleenex. please update one and my favvvvvvvvvv until it's gone soon!

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-06 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter thirteen

i absolutely LOVE this story!!! i loved when ororo went off on Fury in the war room....can't wait for him to get a lightning bolt shoved up his sorry behind...i thought it was cute when Logan helped prove his point about his feelings for Ororo by just holding her while in her room...and the scene in the elevator? *fans herself* whoo, that was hot!!!

*sigh* gotta say it again...i love this!!!

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-06 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter thirteen

Oh thank god that you updated this. Seeing that I ain't following up on the ze other fic (Until its gone...) I have to wait for you to get around to this one....!!

Hopefully, this time around the wait won't be as long....and that's we'll get Mags next....and maybe Longshot??? That will put a whole other 'luck' factor into the mix.

Author's Response: the wait between updates hopefully ( i did say hopefully) won't be as long. And yep, Mags is next--no plans to make Longshot an active participant of the story as of yet, but he's not out of the picture entirely. More soon--I think.

Reviewer: RHapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-06 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter thirteen

Hmmmm... she loves him, eh? :D

that was amazing!!! this chapter was very strong. yeah, strong is the word. there was strong emotions coming from ro in the conference room. From Ro/Lo in the elevator. Everywhere throughout the chapter. Except the beginning. I didn't like Ororo's insecurity when they were talking about Jean.

LOVE the elevator scene!!! Soku indeed

Author's Response: Hmmm. You naughty girl you. As for Ro's insecurities, ehn, we all have 'em, loathe as we are to admit it. ;P

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-06 - 06:25 pm Title: Chapter thirteen

excellent as always..i envy your storytellin' skills [admire em']..but seriously ya gotta update so0n or else [0.0]

Author's Response: LOL. Or else. Why, I think I may have just been threatened. :P Thank you much and most sincerely for the compliments! They mean a lot, and thanks for taking the time to review--it does keep one inspired! More, uh, soon. Yeah, soon.

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