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Reviewer: Rishing Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-02-06 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 14

This story is GREAT!!! When can we expect an update????????

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-17-06 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter 14

What.A.Revelation.Creed is..is.Logan's son!?!?! Dam just when (update soon)I think its safe ya pull one on me [not that im (update soon) complainin' ..i like being on my toes]. Mm, 'Ro's scaring (update soon) me in that oh so interesting, got me curious way!
Hey Ali is pretty cool i (update soon) wish i could replace my friends with her..seriously..no seriously lol juss kiddin' but yeah i just want to acknowledge her; she is as attached to me as Logan and Ororo (update soon). Speaking of Logan and Ororo those two are like fire and gasoline; (update soon) whenever they are together things ignite ;]...Oh yeah, whats Logan gunna do?? His demeanor got me suspicious...pfft lol (update soon). wonderful job as usual windrider (update soon), you know how much i love ya writing!
ill be sure to tune in next time! "again, and again and again", your a "B.A.M.F"

Author's Response: Thanks!! You're a B.A.M.F too!! (I'll update soon) That was subtle. :P ;)

Reviewer: Forsaken Goddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-06 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 14

My god...I get my computer again and come to read this and this is such a wonderful surprise. This is just spectacular. Oh my god, Creed is Logan's son?! This is so, so great! I cannot wait until the next chapter because just like with Bloodbonds, I am hooked.

Reviewer: Layla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-06 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 14

If pregnancy is an issue, Ororo won't be pregnant from Victor because after her exam, Logan was told by Jean that while there was penetration, there were no fluids.

Reviewer: Darkdevil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-06 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 14

I must say, i've got a bad feeling about this.
Ororo was raped by Victor Creed now she's having
abdomenal pains, now Logan have found out his
true connection to Creed. Could we see another
little Creed running around the school? Love
it keep em coming.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-06 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter 14

All I can say is "Whoa." I've been getting caught up on reading Ultimate X-Men and the current story arcs, so at least I finally know who Wraith is in your other stories. I'm really enjoying this one. Lots of suspense, and my throat caught on a big lump on the last chapter when he told her he loved her, and then the perfect scene in the elevator.

Sounds like something sinister is around the corner for Storm, though. More Shadow King? Trying to think who else would manifest themselves in her dreams and make weird tattoos...

Keep it coming. Off to read Until it's Gone, now!

Reviewer: Raeyna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-14-06 - 05:56 am Title: Chapter 14

Cooool, another chapter of KC!!! So stoked. Man, you gotta come up with more of this stuff. It's so awsome!

So, what up with Storm? She's got voices in her head, tatoos appearing and disappearing, body pains and powers going wacko, geeze, what's next? Some, explanations please. Or not. As long as you keep cranking out the chapter's, I'm content. *gasp* And Creed's Wolvie's kid, no way! That's just wrong, and twisted, and oh, what a brilliant plot twist. That means more chappy's. And what's with Fury? He keeps interrupting my RoLo moments, grr. Does he have a little radar that signals 'must interrupt' when it detects when Ro and Wolvie are together? Just wanna kick the guy's booty. At least he didn't do it on this chapter. And I love the love going on between the two. He tries to pull away, she pulls him back and then they...umm...yeah. Awww. I do hope they hash things out. You don't know how many times I've shouted 'tell him!' or 'tell her!'. I love it!! Want more. I'm gonna hold you to that promise. Oh and what was the translation for the 'soku' thing? I keep forgetting to ask.

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-14-06 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter 14

umm whats making her get all sick and stuff? is logan going to tell her about his son? It was a great chapter with a good cliffhanger looking foward to the next one.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-06 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 14

dang, that part about victor being logan's son through me for a loop, had me pause for a good minute, poor logan...gettin' a lil worried bout 'ro, she needs to tell someone about all the voices she's hearing and the weird things she's feeling...thanks for the update!!!

now please tell me you're comin' out with another chapter soon?

Reviewer: mercy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-06 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 14

that was quite disturbing but an interesting twist

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-06 - 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 14

i do love a good plot twist but damn if sabertooth was his son who was his mother will we ever find out or is it unimportant to the story line

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-06 - 11:04 am Title: Chapter 14

just started to read this fic... not bad not bad.... lol.... ur a great writer. love the fact that this story is ALL about RoLo. *winks*. anyway whats with the 'tattoos' oh Ororo... hmmm...... and Creed?! man. that one was a low blow to Logan. im sure he wishes that he could kill Creed all over again.... after all that's happened... i wonder what's gonna happen next... hmmmm...... death in the family?... hmmm.... a new member by the definately 'active' couple... hmmm.... gotta have more. waiting for the next one!... hopefully soon!.... (posted in wrong chapter. lol.)

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-06 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter 14

Ahh, monday morning and something new to distract me from work, yay :D

... Now that's some kind of news :) But the disturbing this is, I hope Logan finds the strength (or better: guts) to tell Ro.
Like she should talk to someone about what's going on with her, too! If it's not Logan it should be Ali. Those two are the closest people to her and she just has to talk to someone. Something's going on, something big. Better not keep it hidden until it's too late. No matter what the professor thinks! All those tatoos, voices, urges to kill and hurt... What's going on with her? Me demands to know!! LOL
Is she pregnant? Is the baby affecting her now? Are Logan's genes sort of doomed to only produce the incarnation of evil?... am I overreacting? (... uhm, I do hope so) LOL :D

... back to work, ugh ;)

Reviewer: X181 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-06 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter 14

The demon seed that is Victor Creed is Logan's, when I read that in the comics, I was like "gggrreeaaatttt". Poor Logie, he's going to beat himself up about it so bad especially with what happened to 'Ro, we're talking a trillion-fold. Aaahh drama, the stuff of champions....

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-06 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter 14

two in a day. somebody is celebrating not haaving HW to do. :) Somehow this sounded familiar **winks** so how will Logan tell ororo that creed is his son? will he tell her? dun-dun-dunnnnnnnnnnnn

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