Date: 06-18-06 - 11:45 am Title: Chapter 16
Aw crap... Ro sitting in her own blood, strands of hair in her hands, talking in a strange language... that's pretty heavy stuff. And hell scary! I so hope Nick's gonna call Logan.
I'm still not sure if it's the Phoenix force inside of Ro. It's just all too weird. Guess I'll probably find out in the next chap...
Geez, what's with this update frenzy here anyway LOL A gazillion updates to a ton of stories. Not that I'm complaining though :D I for one am about to start working on something new, too :) I just need to pick one of the many ideas scribbled down on scraps of paper flying around my desk... *scratches chin* There are just so many of them...
But first things first, on to the next chap!
Date: 06-17-06 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 16
Please tell me there is a continuation to this story...PLEASE
Author's Response: Well, there's another chapter.... :D Enjoy!
Date: 06-16-06 - 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 16
huh. well, apparently my "fav story update email" thingy doesn't always work, bc i finally found this chapter hidden away in all the updates the site's had lately. you're right, it is a shorty, and i do have many more questions, but i'm excited as ever to learn the answers! and here's something weird, i've always either really liked fury, or thought he was a pig. mostly i've liked him, though. but in this, i sort of pity him...cuz i mean....logan? something tells me nicky done piss him off....
Date: 06-15-06 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ororo is Phoenix. Didn't see that coming, although i kind of did. I just asumed you would invent a pssesive god just for Ororo. I'm guessing you will be bringing destruction and chaos for the X-men aswell as the Shi'ar worshippers. And i asume Nick is calling Logan. Well i thought you'd given up on this story at least till the end of summer. Guess i have one more thing to look forward to reading.
Date: 06-15-06 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 16
argh i can't stand that useless son of a bitch Fury.
Dam you'rereally something. you have an extreme talent and flair for writing that pulls at exactly the strands of pain rage and sympathy that it needs to and you have such a way of bringing your stories to vivid life. Honestly I've never read anything that's been able to wrest a reader's emotions with the tight unrelenting grip of its words and story as yours has.
I'm totally your groupie, dude. Keep writing. Forever.
Author's Response: Forever. Groupie? Sah-weet!
Date: 06-15-06 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 16
Awesome update! Lilandra is insane, Nick made a horrible choice, Logan will go berserker crazy when he finds out what's going on and poor 'Ro. It's difficult seeing her in such a state. The pulling out of the hair and the bloody vomit made me cringe. Yikes! This story just keeps getting better! :)
Date: 06-15-06 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter 16
omg, you canNOT stop there! the plot is thickening and it's getting oh-so-good! don't give this story up, because i am enjoying it far too much!
Date: 06-15-06 - 10:04 am Title: Chapter 16
OHHH!!! u gotta continue this!!!!
Date: 06-15-06 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter 16
oooh! the cavalry
Date: 06-15-06 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 16
Jackpot!! Finally!!
The suspense is killing me. Whatever was happinin' with Ro, I thought was like some sort of evil spirit or something, but with Lilandra in the picture doing her thing, all I can say is, what a twist. And what they were doin' to her, mondo bizzaro! Although, I still can't tell if it was Lilandra and her crew or some evil spirit/demon thingy. When I was reading the part where Ro pulls her hair out, I was like 'Owwww' and had to let my own ponytail out. I'm so used to Logan being all tortured and sitting in his own blood and puke, the fact that it's Ro in that situation makes it even more interesting. It's also nice to see Fury playing good guy here and realizing that he royally screwed up. And of course, Logan to the rescue, I can't wait.
One more thing. Please don't give up on this story. I think it has tons and tons of potential. It's already one of my top favorites, heck all your stories are, but this #1 so far. I would really hate it to be TBC'ed forever.
Date: 06-15-06 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter 16
I was happy to see an Update at Last !! And wow, did you come back with a BOOOOOMMMMM!!!!!!! I hope he's calling Logan.
I can't wait for the next Update!!!! Don't keep us hanging!!!
Date: 06-15-06 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter 16
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY he's callin wolvie. GODDAMN WOMAN, welcome back to the land of fanfics. :D **huggies**
Date: 06-15-06 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter 16
AW COME ON!! I waited for so long, sitting with my thumb up my butt (well, not literally), checking gawd knows how many times a day....for this!! Its like you took a starving man, promises of a feast for him and then gave him the leftovers...and even stopped that midway.
Anyways, (enoough ranting), looks like you have given put Ororo in the state/position that Jean usually is. Hmm. Personally I don't care much about the Phoenix force (never have) but am looking foward to your take on it.
Hope that the next update is not as delayed....or as short as this one was. Please!!
(***-toy)