Good start, the way everything was described was real and enjoyable. It pulled the reader into the scene by providing well written and classy sexual situations. Hope you keep writing and I will keep reviewing. Reviews are like Mana from the gods destructive yet oh so pleasureable. You sir should have a million reviews by now you are a proliphic writer who produces quality work.

“Yessss,” Ororo hissed as Logan gave an experimental jerk inside her. She felt so full, so complete. She always felt so complete with him, as if he was the ying to her yang or vice versa….soul mates forever. “Lets get to work then.”
“Work?” Logan arched a shaggy eyebrow at her, his lips curving in a knowing smile.

“Yes, work. After all, the Queen Mother wants an heir for the throne of Wakanda.”


And what's the Key word in all that...yes 'ding, ding, ding,' "WAKANDA" ....

And to you BP...'How do you like them Apples?!' Or 'Pears?' or 'Eggs and Sperm?!' ick..

Okay you guys know what I mean!!

Author's Response: Specially added the country's name just for you...an' why not birds n' bees?

I'd apologize for said comment, but since it produced such a delightfully naughty story, I shall refrain from doing so. This was a wonderful unexpected treat. Let me see if i read between the lines here, Ororo is/was married to T'Challa, but is having an affair with Logan? Gawd, they're perfect together. Seriously. Hmmm....what can I ride yer ass about...hmm.... wood nymph....Now why oh why would that sound familiar to me...? BTW "spear o' love", tops "love dumplings" in randomly funny gender analogies. ;) Before I forget, thank you for this admist all of our dejection over the impending nuptuals. if we don't keep the hope alive, who will?

Author's Response: Hey. I didn't mind it. In fact I am just yanking yer chain and wanking....uh, lets leave it there. The 'wood nymph' yers? Thanks for it again. I got it from a DC-JLA series I have going on, and spear-o'-love, sheer genuius if I do say so myself.