[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 01:44 am Title: The Wedding?
::grabbing her 50th box of tissues:: my God. that's...wow...omg. i can't stop crying. i was doing all right until this: "T’Challa placed Ororo’s hand to his heart and for a moment time skittered backwards and Ororo felt the thundering beat of another man entirely." i just started heaving. this isn't hyperbole either. serious heaving. i can't tell you how beautiful this work is. i think this chapter especially is representative of some of your best work. it's just absolutely gorgeous.
Author's Response: **blushing crimson**
I love you. I really do.
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 01:14 am Title: The Wedding?
GODDAMNIT!! i just wrote this long glowing review and it didn't go through. i'm not doing it again, so here're the highlights
Love the description. The cut out trees were the best.
Love the moment with his mother and ororo chokes! good stuff!
I could almost root for T'challa. ALMOST
Damn that Logan. She's gonna feel guilty. I hope sshe doesn't call out Logan's Name when she and T do the do! That would suck for him!
Did i say you rock?! Evil Wench!
Author's Response: Evil wench? Nice. Almost rooting for T'Challa? Wow. That's a huge compliment. :D Thanks, babe. Y'know how much it means to me to know what you think--hence all the harassing. :P
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