Oh, WR1...

How much torture can I take?? You've got me actually stomaching the marriage, liking BP's protectiveness AND still feeling sorry for Logan all at once??

Shame on you.

Seriously, this chapter's absolutely beautiful. I'm immediately on my way to the next, and the next...well, you get the picture.

Okay, usually I read and run, but my conscious wouldn’t let me enjoy another chapter without leaving a review. I love this story and how you’ve written Ororo, Logan and T’Challa. You just know that before it’s over all three are going to be put through the wringer. Hell, even the way you write the supporting cast reminds me that there was once a time (long before the internet and Marvel loosing it’s damn mind ) that I actually found something to like about the majority of the X-Men and their Villains.

That you haven’t demonized or written T’Challa as lacking next to Logan is incredibly refreshing. At best I’m a passing fan of The Black Panther, but even I’m half in love with him at this point. His put-down of Emma and Val was lovely. As you’ve written him, he is exactly what Ororo needs right now. I actually got chill’s when I read her thought about wanting to have a dream of her own after she’d lived and fought for someone else’s. It’s what I’ve been saying for years. You write each emotion Ororo experiences so vividly that I’m right there with her. And can I just say how happy I am that you didn’t go the ‘who’s the Daddy’ route after her two eventfully nights.

As for Logan… well, I can’t say that I’m feeling sorry for the man. He’s getting a taste of what Storm has been dealing with for how long? Except she didn’t have a night of passion to relive nor the luxury of hating the object of his affections. ‘Cause, you know, it’s in the X-Men handbook that Jean must be loved and adored no matter what.

I have to admit I’m not a die hard RoLo’er ( though I’ve come to realize if one wants decent Storm fiction one had better develop at least a soft spot for the paring ) so I’m actually rooting for the Cat Man.

Can we have more of the Queen Mother? I’m loving her!

Can’t wait for the next update.



Author's Response: **Blushing crimson** Wow. **ahem** wow. Thank you. Sincerely and truly, thank you. The "who's the daddy" is waaaay too contrived and trite, but thank you for picking that point out, I know several people thought i'd play that card. :) More of the Queen Mother? Yes. N'Yami will be making an appearance very soon. :) And yes, if you want good Storm fiction, the RoLoers do it best!! **Go Team!!** ;)

I took a peak at the chappy, and what I saw, I couldn't stomach. I couldn't read the whole thing, so I'm probably missing a couple things, sorry. I'm weak. Just knowing that my two favorite people aren't together is bad enough, but for her to be with someone else and falling in love with him, if she's not already there....I don't think I can take it. I feel like I've lost hope for any Ororo and Logan for this story.

God, I feel so depressed. I think I'll go back to lurkdome (and overdose on some chocolate and Karmel Sutra ice cream), at least for this particular story (I'll be there for KC definitely!) but not this one, for now anyway. Show me some good stuff and I might come back. I think it's worse this time because it's not just a casual fling between Ororo and T'Challa, but they're in l...lo...loo...love (there, I said it, ugh!). I just can't handle it. So I'll see you for KC. *goes back to lurkdom hidey hole, depressed*

Author's Response: **Sigh** Fickle little RoLo creatures. So eager to turn on you when they don't get exactly what they want. :P I do hope you come out of your hole and read this, and review. I love your reviews. They make me smile from ear to pointy ear. I'd hate to have to crawl into your lurkdom hole and drag you out by the roots of your hair...but I will. :) Ps. Enjoy the icecream.

Getting more interesting indeed...just this once, I agree with Emma. LOL. Okay my biggest problem with this chapter is that I want to hate T'Challa, I mean I really want to hate him, but you write him so dang-blasted nice that I just can't. So then I find myself hating him because I can't hate him, and that just doesn't work because now I'm hating him for the wrong reason. Ughhh! Please come in put me out of my misery...update soon, and I mean real soon. ;-)

Author's Response: Update soon, JG. Promise. As always, lovely muse, i thank you and hold dear your wonderful feedback! **hugs**

GAH! it took all day to do this.

Love the role Emma is playing and the jabs and quirks!
You are still making T'Challa likeable **grumbles**

in other words. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! now write more, now!

Author's Response: on it, ducky. On it.

no!!!!! how could you do that ?!! as soon as the main attraction walks in you go and cut it short! I am so mad right now but I am still going back to read this a 2nd time. I want to tell you to update more but I know you already know that you had better to keep the hounds off of your back, oh hell update and quick!!!!!!!! I can't live with the supense of it all!

lmao...i love the exchange b/t ororo, t'challa, and emma, how they put her on hushmouth...omg, ororo and t'challa seem so good together and for like half a second when logan came in i was like, 'don't ruin this for them' and then i was like 'what am i thinking?' i'm so confused...and oh yeah, i liked when t'challa and ororo put val in her place...i was like 'you go girl!' i absolutely love this story...please update soon, pretty please?

Author's Response: Definitely roloangel, definitely!! Thank you for the review--and the high praise. It means a lot!!! :)