[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 06:55 pm Title: The Wedding?
this is so cruel. it was a beautiful wedding but i just cant help but feel like it is sooo wrong. good chapter none the less
Author's Response: Why thank you, mercy! It does eat at the RoLo lover in all of us, doesn't it. LOL. More very soon, and thank you very much for the review!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 06:30 pm Title: The Wedding?
Oh man this is bitter sweet. I've been a fan of the RoLo combination for a long time, but the way you wrote this story really has me rooting for T'Challa and Ororo to work this out. Logan comes in like a thief in the night getting a taste of Ororo before her betrothed has a chance to is classic, especially when you know he's (T'Challa) been anxiously waiting for their wedding day, when he could have easily put a lot of pressure on her about it. Logan seems so confused about everything and only wants her now because she's taken. Talk about a love triangle and you write it so well. I feel like I’m betraying the die hard RoLo fans by saying this but I really want T'Challa and Ororo to live happily ever after. You always leave us wanting more and I can't wait to see what happens next. Looking forward to more DRAMA! Keep up the great job!
Author's Response: **Blushing** Thnak you sooooooo much for the insightful and enjoyable review. I can not emphasize enough how truly reviews like this keep me motivated to write. They make it so worth the effort to make time for this, so a hundred thank yous. More drama and story coming up. :)
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 05:55 pm Title: The Wedding?
Sorry, I haven't reviewed in awhile, you know life gets in the way. Anyway I am enjoying this story, I know you are an avid Ro/Lo and I know people are upset about the coming wedding between Storm & BP but I like how you are not making T'Challa the enemy either. My problem with Ororo is that no matter what you need your family there and I don't care how many Sentinals are standing outside the Xavier mansion you need them there with you. I am noticing with this story than with the usual you have made Storm more sedate(not the I am going to fight for my man). She's the Storm who is unsure about things, and a Storm at the same time does not want to play second fiddle, although it's interesting because BP is also playing second fiddle. As usual great job, and you got me conflicted because I like BP too. :)
Author's Response: Not a problem--I know how real life can get in the way of all the fun stuff. ;) Good to have you back, though. **hugs** you were missed. It's funny because I really didn't intend to like T'Challa, but he grew on me, and now, well you see. Thank you for the very thoughtful review, and you're right that this Storm is more sedate. After everything that life has handed to her, she really just wants a bit of normalcy and love. She isn't fighting for Logan, because in her mind, he isn't her man, and never will be. :(. Let's see where this goes... Thanks again!!
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 05:13 pm Title: The Wedding?
:(
Author's Response: **hugs**
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 12:43 pm Title: The Wedding?
Goddamn it! Of all the things she could do, WHY!? I'm soooooooo mad at Ro right now I could shit a brick! The same goes for Logan! Waiting this whole goddamn time to come clean with his feelings yet skirting around the issue of Jean! Both of them need a good slapping around by a Sentinel if you ask me but I'm not writing this BRILLIANT & INTRIGUING story. I don't know how you do it! Five classes, mounds of homework, two children, Kingdome Come and One Hot Rob later and this story flows from you brain?
Write on Hobbins, write on!
Author's Response: 6 Classes. LOL.
Sentinel smackdown? Whoo, that sounds harsh, eh?
Gawd, I love ya woman! You give seriously fun and inspiring reviews. Makes me wanna dance--I mean write. LOL. :P
Laters!! ^-^
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 07:26 am Title: The Wedding?
0.o - OMG!!!
I can't decide between crying, screaming, and saying nothing at all right now.
Once again you made me like T'Challa here. Even his mother was way more likeable this time around. And they both know/feel that Ro doesn't really love him. Yet (?). He even talked to her about Logan, told her it wasn't too late yet.
And Logan... damn! Well, okay, he found her and all but... He can't just give up like that! He should have told her his goddamn feelings! Just blabbered about want. Yeah, great. That's what Ro needed to hear. "I want you." *rolls eyes*
If he just told her he loved her I'm sure she wouldn't be married to the wrong man now!
And the right one is just walking away?! Just like that?! That can't be happening!!! Fix it! Please!!! *begs on her knees*
Okay, I decided. Tears are flowing silently. Must be the sand ;)
Author's Response: Gotta be the sand--gets everywhere... *ahem* anyway...thank you for the review, as always it is a source of inspiration!! Fix it? Mmmmmaybe. we'll see what happens. More very soon!
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 05:38 am Title: The Wedding?
wicked good.. ^^
Author's Response: wicked thanks ^-^
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 05:33 am Title: The Wedding?
I've struggled to write a bit of fic and RP regarding the BP/Wolvie/Storm situation Uncanny was leading to til Decimation, but I'm happy I didn't. This version of yours is my ideal story and I love the way you have characterized all three of your leads. Though I'm a RoLoer all the way, not every story gets a happy ending. I can't wait to see how you resolve this, please keep it up.
Author's Response: Wow. First, thank you very much for the wonderful and very flattering review. **grins** second, Love the screen name. LMAO. wicked funy!
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 05:26 am Title: The Wedding?
If you keep writing like this, I think the only thing your going to get out of me is a few choked sobs. Well Done!
Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you. I hope I don't just get choked sobs--I like your reviews waaaaaaay too much for that. You're one of the original muses. Can't have you not feeding me inspiration. :P
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 04:21 am Title: The Wedding?
*sobs* NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Why why why
Author's Response: Sorry. **Hands tissue from one of Charmer's 50 boxes**
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 03:35 am Title: The Wedding?
NOOO!!! She actually did it??!!
You have kept me on the edge of my seat this whole time, lemme tell ya. I was actually holding my breath during the wedding scene & when Logan came to her room the night before. I just couldn't seem to read fast enough, lol!
I CAN NOT WAIT to see what happens next! Logan can't give up like That! Ro shouldn't settle for BP! The world just ain't right, I tells ya!
Update--NOW! (lol)
Author's Response: Wow!! I am truly grining like a friggin' loon right now. Thank you so very much for the review, and the next chapter is alread in the works. :) So, uh, how about you? A summer of sunsets chapter for me? Pleeeeeeease. **unabashedly groveling**
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 01:44 am Title: The Wedding?
::grabbing her 50th box of tissues:: my God. that's...wow...omg. i can't stop crying. i was doing all right until this: "T’Challa placed Ororo’s hand to his heart and for a moment time skittered backwards and Ororo felt the thundering beat of another man entirely." i just started heaving. this isn't hyperbole either. serious heaving. i can't tell you how beautiful this work is. i think this chapter especially is representative of some of your best work. it's just absolutely gorgeous.
Author's Response: **blushing crimson**
I love you. I really do.
[Report This]Date: 02-16-06 - 01:14 am Title: The Wedding?
GODDAMNIT!! i just wrote this long glowing review and it didn't go through. i'm not doing it again, so here're the highlights
Love the description. The cut out trees were the best.
Love the moment with his mother and ororo chokes! good stuff!
I could almost root for T'challa. ALMOST
Damn that Logan. She's gonna feel guilty. I hope sshe doesn't call out Logan's Name when she and T do the do! That would suck for him!
Did i say you rock?! Evil Wench!
Author's Response: Evil wench? Nice. Almost rooting for T'Challa? Wow. That's a huge compliment. :D Thanks, babe. Y'know how much it means to me to know what you think--hence all the harassing. :P
[Report This]Date: 02-14-06 - 06:12 am Title: Decisions to be made
I think I need to go lay down. :::Bursts into tears:::
[Report This]Date: 02-07-06 - 04:21 pm Title: Decisions to be made
I really love all of your stories but this one is the best so far! Please update this one soon!
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