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Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 03:09 pm Title: Phone calls and Revelations

NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I Can'y believe she's going! Logan HAS TO go after her! He HAS TO! You hear me? Do you really have to make them suffer like this? Poor Roro! Logan really needs to get his head outa his ass! He's SUCH an idiot! even TChalla sees he loved Ororo! He's teh only one who can't see it! *goes away swearing*

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 12:55 pm Title: Decisions to be made

You know, you certainly know your characters. The speech patterns and choices were accurate to say the least. You sure does paint a purdy picture, ma'am! ;)

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 09:20 am Title: Decisions to be made

She... she... uhm... she said yes... *looks around helpless* ... and now she's going with him... She's willing to do it, even though she doesn't love him.
*turns angry* Damn it Logan! Get off of yer lazy ass and go afer her before it's too late! And this time you better tell her what she so desperately needs to hear! You DO have feelings for her you stupid, thickheaded moron! UGH! Damn he missed her phonecall. Damn he has no idea where she is (but that shouldn't stop him!).
Hhm... at least T'Challa's intentions and feelings seem to be genuine. (even though I don't like that LOL)
I hope he really loves her, I hope he really wants to make and see her happy. I hope he sees that she's not. Not with him. I hope he realizes he can't have her heart because she gave it away a long time ago...
Maybe he should contact Logan. Tell him about Ro's decision. Tell him that it's not too late to make things right. Yet.

I just re-read my review. I'm desparately searching for a way out ain't I? :D *rolls eyes at self* LOL I'm such a hopeless sucker for happy RoLo endings. The more drama and heartache, the more I'm yearning for big time RoLo goodness! I hate to see them hurting like this, but love to read it just as much :)

As for the pics: nothing new yet due to work and stuff :/ Didn't even have time to continue with The Dance. I have some nice ideas in my head though. Hope to find some time soon to let them out :)

Author's Response: LOL. You are too fun, Steph. T'Challa's feelings are indeed genuine for Storm. As for Logan, he's still wrestling with his own sh!#, and let's face it, he ain't really picking up on the neon signs directly in front of him. More drama on the way!! (hope you get to draw soon) :)

Reviewer: elanda1973 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 04:17 am Title: Decisions to be made

She said "YES"? What is going on? I can't deal with her acceptance of T'Challa proposal and Logan's thickheadness in one swoop! Damn him to hell for not seeing what's going on with Ro and her feelings and damn her for running away although she has her reasons! I hope all holy hell breaks loose when Logan finds out she's engaged! HAHAHA! He deserves a little kick in the ass to get his shit together! I can't wait for the next chapter Hobbins!

Author's Response: Holy Hell, huh? Mmmmmaybe. Ro has a lot of reasons for leaving te team, and of course her feelings for Logan are at the root of most of them. He does deserve a little nudge up the old backside, no? More soon!

Reviewer: LaydeRogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 04:14 am Title: Decisions to be made

Damn you Windrider! Why did you have to go and make Black Panther so damn irrestiable?! And why isn't Logan getting his shit together and going after the woman he loves?
And whats up with 'Ro? There's more than one way to solve the waking up/ going to bed with cold sheets problem. I won't go into that. :)
Fix this! Give me my Ro/Lo! You're killin' me here. Oh and when i do give us the Ro/Lo happily ever after ending. I know T'challa will probally still need a bride. I mean, come on, hook a sista up so i can be wed to a king. lol. j/king. No, but for real.

Author's Response: LMFAO....Oh Gawd, i love you. You just made my whole morning with this review. There are ways to deal with waking up in a cold bed...but what way is better than hot, sexy, king? (Aside from growly, hairy canadian?) More coming up. Happy Ro/Lo ending....? Where was that promised?

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 04:10 am Title: Decisions to be made

you ever see that movie the love motel (or something like that it was called), with ewan mcgregor?

thats what this reminded me of

Author's Response: Never seen it. I hope that's a compliment, lol. :D

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-02-06 - 09:57 am Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

There was so much information to process in this chapter. These two are feeling so much emotionally, it is a little overwhelming. I have laughed, gasped, cried, and dag-on near vomited reading this chapter. That stupid scheming Emma. Don't get me wrong, I like her with Scott, and I love her rivalry with Storm...that just makes for good reading...but the kissing of Wolverine is NOT something that I will be able to tolerate. Kitty was right, she does need to catch a smack down...to bad Storm isn't feeling up to it. Anyway, back to the main point. Logan just needs to get his crap together. I was happy when Emma told him that he was simply Jean's runner-up, maybe now it will sink in to that thick skull of his, and he will be able to move on...on to 'Ro. But now after getting to the end of the chapter I have this sinking feeling...'Ro wants to start a family and live for herself now, so I'm guessing she was running back to Africa and to T'Challa. :::eyes began to tear up::: I think this one is going to be a tear jerker. So in closing...Windrider1 you are awesome!!!! ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you, JG, for the wonderful --WONDERFUL-- review. Logan does need to get his crap together. Whether it will be in time to stop Ororo and T'Challa remains to be seen... More soon. :D

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-01-06 - 11:51 am Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

Well! That was definitely an emotional chapter! What an ass that Logan! I suppose the ending redeemed him somewhat but oh how I wanted to smack him and then stomp Emma and kick Logan a few times just for good measure. The reality was harsh but it does look as if he’s at least thinking about how he messed up with Ororo! Now I can see her going back to charming T’Challa vulnerable and succumbing to that rascal but hopefully Logan will think about that too.

This has turned out to be quite a nifty triangle! I'm going to have to agree with the talented Minarya, this is the most compelling story you've written and quite possibly the best.

Author's Response: **Chanting: no pressure, no pressure, no pressure...** Ororo has a lot to think about...where and with who she ends up with is anyone's guess. :P

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-01-06 - 02:26 am Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

: I had followed that by saying that expression was so good ^^

Author's Response: **grinning** Thank ya, nick!! Much appreciated.

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-01-06 - 02:25 am Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

"right as rain"...

Reviewer: elanda1973 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-01-06 - 01:59 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

Whoa! What the hell was Logan thinking? He needs to get his head out of his adamantium ass and see what a good woman he has in front of him before it's too late! I love everything so far 'cept T'Challa and his selfish mother. I feel for Ro soooooo much right now but hopefully she'll get what she wants, right? Write on Hobbins, write on!

Author's Response: El, I love you!! You make me smile from ear to frikkin' ear. Logan ai't thinking. That's his problem! More soon, babe.

Reviewer: Sheridan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-31-06 - 04:10 pm Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

Loving this story already. I don't think its on the yahoo group, am I right?

Author's Response: It wasn't--it is now. THanks for pointing that out! ;) and thank you very, very much for the review.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-06 - 07:31 pm Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

Oh and did i mention i LOVE Wolvie in a suit? Or just how much i liked this chapter?

Author's Response: Wolvie in a suit is YUMMY.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-06 - 07:09 pm Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

WOW! WOW! That's twice in a week you amaze me. I *almost* sympathized with Emma there. She's a bitch, but she's the kind you love to hate. You can't help to think that there's something more underneeth that diamond shell. I like teh way you write her. I think she could be good.

I loev the way you analised Wolvie's neeed to take care of teh peopel he loves. You write ROLO so WELL. You're spot on with both of them.


Author's Response: Awwwww....thanks Panther. You make writing so much fun!! ::muah!::

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-06 - 08:39 am Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

Loved the scenes in the boathouse!
He put his arms around her... again :) I love when he does that!
OMG, that single tear... he saw it and yet resisted the urge to do something about it! Damnit! Why did he not just follow his instincts here? Yeah, she wanted him to leave but when did he ever follow orders that didn't make any sense? ;)
And now she just left. I see it in my head. That scene. Logan sitting in the dark, alone, at the lake while unknown to him Storm is riding her winds, leaving, the distance between them growing and growing. ... That's so sad.
Logan should follow her, should find out about T'Challa! Maybe that'll help him realize his true feelings for Ro. The actual danger of losing her to someone else.

Author's Response: Logan needs a swift kick in the pants. More soon!! Thank you sooooo much for your encouragement. Btw, any new pics??

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