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Reviewer: LaydeRogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-06 - 05:38 am Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

This story is becoming a fast favorite of mine. Oh, who am i kidding any story with the name Winderider1 next to it is an immediate favorite! So, i have this Ro/Lo side of me where i want Ororo and Logan to conqure all odds and have a happily ever after.

But then i read this story and i don't know, i see my self kinda, sorta, maybe rooting for the Panther to woe Storm. *Dodges Blunt Items* I mean atleast he's coming correct with his advances. I'd take him of Storm decides to live in an African nunery.

All i have to say is that Ro and Lo better get their shit together. And i will still be looking for my happily ever after Ro/Lo ending. But not without a few awesome bumps in the road along the way.

Author's Response: There will be plenty of emotional bumps in the road between our favorite duo. As for T'Challa...don't count him out of the running for Ro's affections. Logan is a bit thick when it comes to things outside his immediate realm.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-06 - 05:28 am Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

excellent! i'd love to see a physically impaired storm

Author's Response: Storm has issues...LOL.

Reviewer: Minarya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-06 - 04:37 am Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

I really think this might be your most well-written story to date! I can't put my finger on it, exactly, but there's a real pacing and depth to this I like very much! Which is not to say your other stories *don't* have that, because they do! Maybe it's just that this story approaches the relationship so differently. I'm fascinated with it and can't wait to see how you proceed! ;)

Author's Response: Wow. **blushing profusely** Thank you very much. I am approaching this relationship from a different angle. I can't wait to see where I go with this either, I'm writing on the fly...let's hope it works out. ;)

Reviewer: Echo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-06 - 04:07 am Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

Absolutely beautiful...I love the emotions rolling around this story! I tell ya, tiic over at Marvel need to be hiring some of you guys full time--put some emotional "umph" back into these stories.

This chapter was absolutely breathtaking. I was holding my breath (literally, really) during the scenes in the boathouse.

I hope you continue this fic--it's just so damn good! I can't wait for an update! Geat job!

Author's Response: Thank you!! After you made me cry, an emotional compliment from you is sooooo appreciated. I will indeed be cntinuing this fic. Where it goes, no one knows.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-06 - 03:02 am Title: Old Wounds, New Insights

"Right as rain" is very appropriate for the end of this chapter.

Sean's death and all, there was a heavy sadness to this chapter. Damn him for just walking away. that was the one time he really should'n't've respected her wishes!

Author's Response: What can I say, Logan's got a thick adamantium skull... THis is turning out to be a heavy story...more soon.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-29-06 - 08:06 pm Title: Sad news

Oh, gosh! Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful! That's really all that needs to be said. Still, who would I be if I didn't elaborate? ;D I actually appreciate the spoilers as I'm no longer buying X-Men comics other than X-Factor and Ultimate (maybe) although I may give Astonishing another go since Mr. Whedon's realized his last arc was a bit of a dull over long mistake. Oh but, darling Windrider your story is no such thing. Who would have thought anyone would be able turn a horrible situation into something so delicious?

Your Logan was spot on. He always accepts the risks and Scott's changing it seems, rougher and less optimistic, a clearer head. I like him as you've written him. Oh, and poor Ororo! You made me feel her aching loneliness. I truly felt for her. And Emma! Oh, now that was funny! I love their relationship.

Best of all when those arms wrapped around her and it turned out to be Logan I felt so excited, I know - quite silly but can't help the RoLo craving. And on a totally different note I kind of agree with Rhapsody81 - I like core as you used 'center' twice but how picky is that? All and all near about perfect and wonderfully done. Now why haven't I added you to my favorites way before this? ;D

Author's Response: Oh my. You do realize I am sincerely flushed crimson now, right? Seriously. Wow. Uhm, thank you. I can't tell you how much it means to have an author of your caliber enjoy my fics. (Not just blowing smoke up your ass either.) Onto the points of your review... I changed it to 'core' you and Rhaps will be pleased. LOL. Upon a fresh read, I happened to agree. T'Challa. I actually like him--well, let me rephrase that. I like Christopher Priest's T'Challa. I don't have a good feel for his mother, because she is newly resurfaced. In Priest's run she was dead...so, I am writing her as I want. Overbearing, but good intentioned. Logan, spot on? *grins* That makes me happy. Despite being a huge fan of Wolverine I sometimes feel writers don't get him, hell, I don't always get him. So thank you!! Ororo and Emma. Yes, they have n interesting relationship. That'll be coming up in the following chapter. Again, thank you, thank you, thank you. Why aren't I on your list--you're on mine. LOL. Now, stop reading my reviews and go update!! ;)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-29-06 - 07:35 pm Title: Bride Hunt

Egad this is lovely! And it shouldn't be because it's T'Challa but your writing is utterly beautiful! I loved the description of his skin color, melted chocolate and just as smooth now that is truly one of the most poetic descriptions I have ever read. And the mother - despite the way she was itching to check out Ororo's teeth, was just wonderfully, delightfully done! Her earnest desire for her son's happiness and for grandchildren tickled me despite not wanting to like her or T'Challa in this situation.

You see, Windrider your stories are little gems that put mine to shame! Darling, if Dickey could write a story like this then I wouldn't feel half the despair I feel over the pending nuptials.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-06 - 03:32 pm Title: Sad news

I wish you were Marvel. Then we wouldnt have this whole BP marrige thing.

Very sad story. Kind of interesting, but i'm looking forward to CK

Author's Response: You and Kingdom Come...LOL. More on both soon Panther. :D

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-06 - 07:32 am Title: Sad news

Jeannie, Jeannie, Jeannie... damnit boy, wake up! Ugh! *rolls eyes at Logan* Even Scott was irritated.
At least Scott's words had some effect on him and made him think. Finally! ;)
Now Ro's back home and Logan already feels more centered. I'm glad he noticed that, heh. On the other side she feels completely out of place. Not at home.
I really hope they are going to find out that "home" does not necessarily have to be a place but a person... That they DO belong, to each other :D

Author's Response: LOL. I look forward to your reviews! You're always so passionate! Love it! More coming soon. As for Logan, the man is frikkin' thick.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-06 - 05:51 am Title: Sad news

logan wants to make her stay! good, cuz she doesnt look like she wants to stay in a place that makes her remember dead friends.

Author's Response: Let's see if Logan pulls his shit together.... :)

Reviewer: Lady Dreamwalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-06 - 04:41 am Title: Sad news

Heard a rumor that Banshee had died, I guess it's confirmed. daamn marvel >< They have missed him soo much and now ending with death? Think I'm gonna take a huuge break from uncanny, adjectivless and all other x-men except ultimate.

sorry for raving when I should review =). as always I love it, but it was too short woman! I'm addicted to your fics! :P

Author's Response: LOL. No worries on the rant--we all need to. I'm taking a break from Marvel too. They've screwed up BIG this time, and I hope people let them know it. Loudly and consistently! As for too short--the next chapter is longer, so I hope that tides ya over. ;)

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-06 - 01:17 am Title: Sad news

Okay, i see the centered and displacement now. I still prefer the word core but okay. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-26-06 - 08:16 pm Title: Bride Hunt

This story is going to have me in tears very soon...I can just feel it. This is excellent...your stories always are. But let me just say that Logan better pull his head outta his butt, and fast. I'm not entirely hating T'Challa in this story, though you know I want to, and I don't want him to get Storm, but he at least realizes how special she is...that she is worth waiting for. Oh Logan you better get your crap together buddy! LOL.

Author's Response: LMAO. Man, i love how involved you get. I can just envision you bitch-slapping Logan and shaking him by his scruff, saying something along the lines of: "Get your shit together, Bub. The best thing in your life is about to be lost forever--and guess what numbskull, it isn't Jeannie." Update coming!! Good to see a review from ya! Your missed!! :X *muah*

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-26-06 - 05:45 pm Title: Bride Hunt

I am new to this board and I don't write any of the fan fic but I love to read it. This is the best story so far about these two. Keep it up. by the way I really like all of your stories. I am waiting for the update

Author's Response: Well, first off, WELCOME!! Love this Realm. Very open, fun, friendly and above all supportive of it's members. THank you for the compliments *grins*, I assure you they feed the beast and make me want to write more. An update should be up later tonight. Hope you like it, and again Thank you and Welcome!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-06 - 01:38 pm Title: Bride Hunt

OMG, his mother! *shocked* All she sees in Ro is a birth-giving-machine! Checking her out like some sort of cattle on the cattle market! She's even worse than her son! And here he even said he would give up his kingdom if that's the only way to be with Ro (I wonder what his mother would say about that idea LOL). Was that even the truth or did he just tell her that to get to her? I mean, I'm sure he knows what Ro wants/needs to hear...
Ugh, I hope Ro seeks out Logan soon to find out about his feelings. Even if it's just to make sure he doesn't feel a thing (which cannot be btw. ;) ). But maybe he'll come to his senses first and goes to find her instead.

Author's Response: I'm uber excited to see you so involved in this story!! Ro and Logan will cross paths again soon...we'll see what happens then.... *grinning and rubbing hands*

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