Poor Logan. It must be damn hard to see those bastards treat Ro like that, even dare to smack her across the face. And all he can do without blowing his cover and putting her in danger is stand there and watch.
I wonder what plan he has in mind already... Good thing he contacted Charles, hopefully he'll send the cavalry :)
Damn, I can't sit still here, heh. I need another update LOL :D

I though this chapter was soooo awesome with all the different emotions all the characters expressed and especially the part where Xavier said "Damn!" and when long finally told storm he loved her. As usually you never disappoint.

At first i was bit upset at how weak storm seemed through the whole story, with all the begging him back and what not, but now that their together again it makes it all the more beautiful that she buried her pride and fear for the one she loved and, luckly it wasn't all in vain.

i just have one question, in the chapter before Ro told those boys she was with Kiney. if one of them recognized her, wouldn't he put two and two together and realize that kiney knew storm? plus he didn't want her harmed in anyway, that could give a little of himself away. well i can't wait to see what logan does about the situation they're in, i'm especailly waiting for the gutting of the dude who had the nerve to smack ro, grooooowwwllll. keep up the good work.

your adoring fan!

oooo good morning, charmer! this was action-packed, indeed! just when we think it's all going to be okay, you throw in another wrench! and yknow what? i think i liked it. in fact, i loved it. i loved it SO MUCH that i think you should update again NOW! ;)