Date: 01-04-07 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God
Great story. I like how you write Ro and Logan together. I got hooked immediatly and I've read so far and - stopped 'cos I was laughing so hard about the german translations.
Well, I suck at writing english so I ain't offended. ^^
I'd like to correct this creepy and funny german bable fish spilled out. You ok with that I hope.
Freeze! Hands up! Drop your weapons!
Keine Bewegung! Hände hoch! Waffen fallen lassen!
We mean no harm. Our plane crashed.
Wir wollen Euch nichts tun. Unser Flugzeug ist abgestürzt.
We are looking for five mutant criminals. You match the descriptions.
Wir suchen nach fünf Mutanten-Verbrecher. Ihr paßt auf die Beschreibung.
(for this funny - looking "ß" you can write "ss" instead)
Is being a mutant a crime?
Ist es ein Verbrechen ein Mutant zu sein?
You may ask the Leader yourself.
Das kannst du den Anführer selber fragen.
Now I'm off reading more of your wondeful RoLo ffs. Keep them coming.
Greetings from Germany
Conlai
Author's Response: Oh, cool! Someone to correct my German. Thanks a ton, I'll fix the errors when I get a chance :)
Date: 06-22-06 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God
Jeffrey, right... had forgotten all about him. Damn... Stupid fanatics and their even more stupid followers... never understood that crazy concept. But it seems to work. For stupid people :)
Date: 06-14-06 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God
oooo things are get ca-RAY-zy and i'm loving it! i'd completely forgotten about jeffrey, but what a way to bring him back. very well done!
Date: 06-13-06 - 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God
Amazing. I had forgotten about Jeffrey in the shuffle. It totally makes sense, though. Now I can also see why Magneto would have such a vested interest in taking these guys down, too.
This is excellent, imaginative storytelling. Good work. Keep it coming.
Date: 06-13-06 - 12:36 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God
So good! I wish I had more time to layer you in oozing sweet praise, but I have to go study. Just know that this rocked and I can't wauit for more!!
Date: 06-13-06 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God
Wolverine should've never let that kid live. damn.
Date: 06-13-06 - 11:35 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God
Awesome. I didn't really expect this, but I was wondering where that person disappeared off to.
Anyway, I'm really liking this. Been lurking for a bit, but I finally decided to drop a review. I love how you develop your characters.