Date: 09-21-09 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil
...what? please say you're going to write more! it's a cliff hanger!! is there a part 3 to this? i want to cry!! lol what happens next?!
lol if you can't tell already i like the story
Date: 01-04-07 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil
Hiya, me again!^^
Evil and bad people there in South Germany... you got that right. ;-) I'm from the North - oy, my luck, eh?^^
May I suggest " Weg vom Gitter! Sofort!" instead of
"Schritt weg vom Gatter! Jetzt!" ? It's more like we speak here in Germany. And - sorry for my mistakes.^^
Greetz
Conlai
Date: 06-22-06 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil
She's pregnant. And neither of them knew. What a horrible and ugly way to find out about something beautiful like that. Come on Logan, free yourself! Come on Jeannie, bring the cavalry! Ro, just use that damn lightning! On to the next chapter... can't stop, must go on reading, need to know...
Date: 06-21-06 - 01:44 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil
that strange..why is Ro just standing there? Is he holding her captive somehow?
Date: 06-16-06 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil
Uh-oh...Jeffery better quit messing around with 'Ro and her baby...or someone's gonna get hurt!
Just when I thought you couldn't make me any more tense with the action in this, you kick it up another ten notches. I hope you have another two or three chapters percolating away soon! At least one chapter for Jeffery to get his butt kicked, and another two for Ororo and Logan to recover and have a happy ending!
Date: 06-16-06 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil
UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UP_DATE_NOW.
NOOOOOWWW.
(hee! Michael Vaughn!!! ^^ lol)
Date: 06-16-06 - 01:41 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil
Damn.. as soo n as i left the other review, this was posted. GOOD GRAVY!!! Update this too, but ummm... i still want 4 chappies of the other story!!!