Date: 03-05-15 - 04:24 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
Good story
Date: 12-05-13 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
Wow....great sequel. Loved all the twists and turns. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Date: 11-10-10 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
Another wonderful story with a beautiful ending. You truly have a gift!!
Date: 06-25-06 - 06:34 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
Yes. Write an epilogue. Something that catches up with either the pregnant couple or the married couple. Or even the pregnant, marrying, about to pop any time now couple! I'd love to hear Ororo complaining about not being able to see her feet.
C
Date: 06-22-06 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
What a wonderful way to end this story :D After all the chaos and hurt they had to go through this is just perfect!
Loved how he just knew how to talk to Ro to get her into fighting mode. Loved his proposal on the jet. Still smiling at that.
Logan totally engrossed in watching the ultrasound of his child was soo sweet. He's gonna make a fantastic daddy :)
Well, like I said, a wonderful way to end this story.
Date: 06-21-06 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
I want more! This was so sweet and touching and perfect after the hell they went though..Im almost sad to see this go but I have To Survive to look forward to so i can't complain...much
Date: 06-17-06 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
wonderful!
Date: 06-16-06 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
**claps madly** Wow. That was beautiful and heart wrenching and very fulfilling. I'm grinning like an idiot. ;)
Date: 06-16-06 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
*sniff* yayy.
Date: 06-16-06 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
wow, what a story, what a story!! u had me on the edge of my seat wondering what was gonna happen and if everyone was gonna make it...geez, i loved this and i'm so sad to see it go but i loved the ending and will checkin' up too see if u decide to post an epilogue...
Date: 06-16-06 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
brilliant ending to a great story!
thanks for the read!
Date: 06-16-06 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen
JEEZ!!! that was certainly a roller coaster!!! one question, if Ro is only about 6 weeks old, how was the sex of the baby known? or did Jeffrey use "the son" thing as a ploy to piss off Wolvie?
Anyway, Well done... Now seriously get back to those 4 chapters I've requested.