[Report This]Date: 07-03-06 - 07:39 pm Title: Lotsa Talking
This is a really good story, I like the dynamic between Logan and Ororo plus his daughters and I gotta say you wrote the kids well too I dont know how I would have reacted if my dad started bringing one of my teachers along for a date!!
Author's Response: Thanks. That angle was something I missed the first time around. Will try to get more in the upcoming chapters.
[Report This]Date: 06-28-06 - 09:38 am Title: Lotsa Talking
Finally an update! Yay! And even better, this time around she said "yes" :D I was a little afraid when she told him "no", thinking "awww, not again", but when she told him to think about it my hope piped up again :)
Now I can't wait for their first date!
Author's Response: Thanks Steph. Glad u liked the change. I even managed to shoehorn that conversation with Cecelia in it.
[Report This]Date: 06-28-06 - 06:22 am Title: Lotsa Talking
yess! finally, this has been updated! woohoooo. thanks for finally updating. I reckon i liky this revised piece better coz ororo sed yes to logan :D
Update soon plz!
Author's Response: Yup. Seeing as I was revising it, why not go the other way with Ororo's answer. Lets see how it works out....or if they even get there.
[Report This]Date: 06-28-06 - 02:59 am Title: Lotsa Talking
glad to see this one updated. cecilia reminds me of pretty much every friend i had during h.s... oy
Author's Response: Thanks. Give a read to 'Once Upon A Time...'. Am sure you'll like that too.
[Report This]Date: 06-27-06 - 08:51 pm Title: Lotsa Talking
I like the visual of the pom-poms. That's cute. Yeah, female inner monologue is kinda like that around a hot guy.
Author's Response: Thanks. This update was really months in the coming, but now, with Y&T just about over and X-ed going the same way, I think I should be able to get this fic going again.
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