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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-06 - 04:21 am Title: ‘Interesting’

For a moment, I almost couldn't tell if older Ororo was offering younger 'Ro the chance to feel the babies, or her chafing nipples. Might wanna look at that paragraph, although...it would put a naughty spin on the story!!!

I like Ororo with blue eyes, too. I keep hoping that in Ultimates, they will have Ororo go through some physicial transformation that will revert her eyes to blue, like they are supposed to be.

Author's Response: Ah...feeling the chafing nipples. Now that brings up an entirely different set of possibilites. After all what could be better than one Ororo.....How about two of 'em?

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-06 - 05:32 am Title: ‘Interesting’

Another great addition to a masterpiece in the making. I liked the flow following in the story, albeit maybe a little less Rogue and th story of Bobby/Rogue/Piotr/Kitty..since I wanted to get Xavier's input and feelings on this. He seems unusually attached to both people and I really wanted to get an incite into what's going through his head.

VB

Reviewer: RHapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-06 - 12:53 pm Title: ‘Interesting’

so um, where's the movie verse Logan in all of this??? i would love for him to make an appearance at the ultiamte verse mansion and his 'Ro calms him or something.


Author's Response: More about MV Logan in the latest update (Ch.06). R&R it too!!

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-06 - 12:04 pm Title: ‘Interesting’

your writing the two ororos very well you can definatly tell the differense. when will we find out about logan?

Author's Response: Logan (MV) makes an appearance in the next chapter....and his counterpart (returns) hopefully in the one after that!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-06 - 07:12 am Title: ‘Interesting’

I liked the Ro/Ro talk and hope there'll be more :)
Also can't wait to see what'll happen during dinner. I'm wondering if MV Ro will even have the time to eat, heh. I can see everyone firing a thousand questions at her :)
Hopefully MV Beast and the others will be able to figure out what happened, maybe even replicate the process or at least contact their lost teammates somehow...

So far it's not confusing at all for me to differ between the two Ro's/their universes. The way you write makes it very clear to me. So keep it up :)

Oh, and I'm totally with you on your "Ro with blue eyes only" decision!

Author's Response: Thanks Steph. Always love ur reviews!! Posted next chapter.....R&R that too!!

Reviewer: Echo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-06 - 03:55 am Title: ‘Interesting’

Hey BW! Glad to see an update for this Fic! I thought the conversation btw Ororos was done really well. It's not hard at all for me to tell the difference between them or their respective U's. You've got me even more curious as to what's happened to MU-Logan, though; I hope he isn't hurt to badly...or worse. Although, that would be interesting--especially if MU-Ro can't make it back to her own time-line...OOoh, I can't wait to see where this goes! Great update--Need more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As for MV Logan, check out next update. More from him....but first, the UV Logan and the others!!

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