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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-15-06 - 08:57 am Title: Changes

Had to re-read a couple of chapters to get back into things. Has been a while for me *damn real life ;)*
... uhm. I'm not sure but I think I'm still not getting it LOL. Not everything. But I got the feeling things are starting to make sense now... My guess so far: MV Logan and Ro are somehow totally out of sync in this dimension, living through time way faster than the rest. And their abilities seem enhanced quite a bit since Logan can hear thoughts...
On to the next chap, can't wait to find out more!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-21-06 - 02:47 am Title: Changes

Whoa! Whoa! Okay, now everything’s starting to make sense and yet not! But I am loving this, BW! Storm the elemental has always intrigued me, have a story in the works on that – can’t say I’m copying either! ;P Two thumbs up! And now, sadly I must seek sleep if I'm to read and review another day plus work - you know how real life is.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-10-06 - 04:39 am Title: Changes

okahy this takes some time to grasp but I got it..this is definitlehy one of those fics you have to pay attention to, to understand jack. Now the problem and only problem I'm having is why Wolverine is not inanimate, unsure about the children---but Ororo is? Although I get she's now in the past 6 years before and hence the kids are here now. I love the children although I want the boy to say something.

AS for wolverine now I do wonder what's goign on...how was he able to hear the thoughts? He's no telepath but then I also wondered how powerful his senses were that he was able to hear so many sounds and so loudly that he ws hemoragging this is crazy. Did the transferring from one time to another cause that change in him....at first I thought he was turning into pure animal...now I'm thinking it's something else but unsure what it is....

Anyway loving the fic so far and I can't wait for 16.

VB

Author's Response: Neither Ororo or Logan are 'unsure' about the children. As for either of them talking, more in the coming chapters....and as for the last point, let me get back to you about that. And you DO have to keep on paying attention.

Reviewer: joe mckee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-06 - 11:45 pm Title: Changes

interesting chapter but it created almost as many questions as it answered glad ta seee your updating this good story look forward ta where your going from here :)

Author's Response: Well, if it answered questions, I guess it served the purpose. I am trying to tie in events/situations stated before...going back to the thing that started it all, the accident. Next update coming soon....An' thanks for the update. Hoping for more from your end.

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-06 - 08:40 pm Title: Changes

ok i get it now but when will everything get back to normal for them?are the ororos coming apart in time or something? will they and the kids find their way back to their own time period? what will happen when they go back?or do i just have it all wrong? will the twins stay the same age or will they revert back? will ororo finally really explain what he hell is going on with this glowing in the mist mother earth thing? this story is a little bit hard to follow but this chap cleared up a littleof the confusion. I am looking foward to reading the next one hopefully more will be reaveled.

Author's Response: I really love your reviews, especially when you ask questions like this. Although I'll *try to* clear up things in the coming updates, let me try to get some here. Normal. Who says they aren't normal? The Ororos were linked only for a short time....more on that soon. Maybe in the next chapter itself. As for going back, I think we can safely assume that they will go back....unles.... For what will happen when they go back, it all depends TO when they go back!! Ororo's (Movie one) explanation coming up soon. Finally, the glowing mist....how about taking a look at (movie) Logan? As for the confusion...going into this fic. (esp. the last few chapters), I knew that there was an equal chance of make or break for it. I tend/like to use flashbacks and POVs...a lot. With this, I just wanted to give them a different twist i.e. kinda seperate for each character. We already had both Logans and round about both Ororos also. More coming soon!!

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