[Report This]Date: 05-15-06 - 09:35 am Title: Hearts & Minds
"Rocky-Orange-Beer-Gut-Show" LOL! Ben and Jubes, that can only end in disaster, heh ;) What is it Henry found out?
Aww, poor kids. They were just playing and almost got attacked by a guy that looked pretty much like their daddy.
And poor Ro :( Like she said, first Hank, now Logan... who's next in breaking her heart, please line up and take a number... I really hope Logan will come around. Soon! I hate seeing her hurting like that.
Author's Response: Well, one can always count on Jubes for a good time. And as for Ultimate RoLo, haven't quite decided what to do with them.
[Report This]Date: 04-29-06 - 07:30 pm Title: Hearts & Minds
Very nice story! And also very interesting. I loved the firs few chapters....but you seem to be as lost in all this mess as i am. The last few chapters have been very confusing, and somehow they seem to dragging along, delaying the explanation more than it needs to be. Ultimate Logan has been acting very weird in the last few chapter, very un-Logan like, and so has ultimate Ororo. While seing your older counterparts would be desconcerting, but their moments seemed a bit out of place.
Like i said, i really like your writing, and you manage to get the characters right. You seem to find the right moments for fun and for emotion. I'm anxiously awaiting an update and maybe a rewrite of the last 3 or 4 chapters.
[Report This]Date: 04-27-06 - 01:12 pm Title: Hearts & Minds
I love having the interaction between movie X-Men and movie F4. I really enjoyed this chapter - love this story but we still have no answers as to why and how Ororo and Logan are seemingly living in Ultimate universe with rapidly aged children. The suspense is killing me here, BW!
[Report This]Date: 04-25-06 - 08:00 pm Title: Hearts & Minds
Get to Ultimate Ro and Wolvie....:P
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