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Reviewer: Echo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 11:59 pm Title: Flash-‘WAY’-Back

lolol--I wondered if 'Nowhere' was really a town name or not!

I loved the scene where M-verse Logan calls the School and gets Ult. Verse Emma! That was just classic!

Now I'm curious as to how UV-Xavier knows MV-Logan?? OOh, I can't wait!!

Reviewer: Echo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 11:48 pm Title: Surprising Revelations

O hell, you know you gotta explain that one! Great chapter! Can't wait to read more--and I won't ! One to the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Echo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 11:35 pm Title: Family Matters

Hi BW-
Sorry I haven't been keeping up here. I was in the same 'lull' as you mentioned previously, but I'm willing myself out of it.

Okay, as for a review: I still love this story, but this chap. in particular I found a little hard to keep up btw which Ro was being referred to and had to re-read a few paragraphs to try to get it straight. However, other than that confusion, I'd say this was a really great read; I liked the attention to Ult. Logan's tho'ts/feelings, and I can't wait to see what's goin on w/ older-Ro and M-verse Logan.


Author's Response: Have updated and started to gather the loose ends. Have done the movie side so far. Will get to the others next.

Reviewer: Echo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 11:23 pm Title: Down, Downer, Downest

Ah, I really needed that. BW I love this fic! It's orginal, heartwarming and yet has great action in it. I love the parallels btw the 'verses and the respective characters. On to the next update!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I have been late in responding to the reviews for this fic. Getting them now. On to the next review. ;)

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-21-06 - 10:34 pm Title: Prologue

oh thank the lord that ororo ain't doing that misty thing 24/7 that would have been a bit much to handle! I kind of like this idea of her being one with the elements SOMETIMES. I don't know if I could handle her like all the time,there would no more out of this world love scenes for her anymore! but can't wait for you to get into more detail about how she got that way. also looking foward to learning more abou the kids and som more family moments b/c those are always cute. keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-21-06 - 02:47 am Title: Changes

Whoa! Whoa! Okay, now everything’s starting to make sense and yet not! But I am loving this, BW! Storm the elemental has always intrigued me, have a story in the works on that – can’t say I’m copying either! ;P Two thumbs up! And now, sadly I must seek sleep if I'm to read and review another day plus work - you know how real life is.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-21-06 - 02:34 am Title: Even More…

I would have thought Ororo would have garnered movie Logan’s immediate attention rather than Rogue but you’re the one in charge – lol! As far as names and sex why not just duplicates of their parents, white haired Ororo possibly called Aurora or N’Dare? And the duplicate of Logan called James or Jim?

Reviewer: angel24buffy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-21-06 - 02:18 am Title: The Tea 'Thing'

I just read Ch. 1-16 today. This is great. I can't wait to read the nextone.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-21-06 - 01:33 am Title: Surprising Revelations

Scott was spot on. I loved his take charge ’tude – check her for drugs! Do your thing! I never mind Scott unless he’s paired up with Emma but your Scott’s a pleasure to read.

Reviewer: chyti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-18-06 - 02:53 pm Title: Prologue

this is a hard to follow story, i will have to re-read it to get a better understanding. please update x-verse it is one of my favorites.

Reviewer: ebony8303eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-18-06 - 12:15 am Title: The Tea 'Thing'

oh my goodness the boy is a shapeshifter! i didn't see that coming for the life of me. I like it. i'll go a little easy this time since you have been on story overdrive. i think it's all coming together for me now with this story. i think i have a pretty good idea whats going on so i'll just wait for the next update. good chap looking for the next one!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-17-06 - 11:55 pm Title: The Tea 'Thing'

“What’dya think? Molson. What else?”

“Sounds good.”

I liked this bit. Made me smile pretty wide. Interesting take on RoLo's kids.

Author's Response: Hey. 'I AM Canadian'. Isn't that what Molson says. As for the kids, this is just the beginning.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-11-06 - 02:30 am Title: Storm Clouds


After being in the dumps about Storm's wedding I've finally picked myself up and have started reading again. Partially because of the rallying of the wonderful folks at the Storm 'n Wolverine group but also because you and W6C came out with stories. I know yours was already up here but it just happened to be one I had actually taken the time to read, I just can't keep up with your updates try as I might, and I enjoyed this story in particular so thanks for posting them on the yahoo groups. It was a much needed reminder that life isn't all about comics and that RoLo does live if only in our stories. And boy does it! You've written quite the page turner her. I hope to be caught up by tomorrow.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-10-06 - 11:29 pm Title: Prologue

My brain hurts.
Ya lost me with the first flash-back with the second Logan. I'm gonna try this story again, and again....

Until then the brain gets iced.

But, but, prease prease update Survial, and X-verse (I love the cameos and the rolo in that.) Huge fan of those. : )

I eagerly await you Secrets sequel. I wanna know how they hooked up.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-10-06 - 04:39 am Title: Changes

okahy this takes some time to grasp but I got it..this is definitlehy one of those fics you have to pay attention to, to understand jack. Now the problem and only problem I'm having is why Wolverine is not inanimate, unsure about the children---but Ororo is? Although I get she's now in the past 6 years before and hence the kids are here now. I love the children although I want the boy to say something.

AS for wolverine now I do wonder what's goign on...how was he able to hear the thoughts? He's no telepath but then I also wondered how powerful his senses were that he was able to hear so many sounds and so loudly that he ws hemoragging this is crazy. Did the transferring from one time to another cause that change in him....at first I thought he was turning into pure animal...now I'm thinking it's something else but unsure what it is....

Anyway loving the fic so far and I can't wait for 16.

VB

Author's Response: Neither Ororo or Logan are 'unsure' about the children. As for either of them talking, more in the coming chapters....and as for the last point, let me get back to you about that. And you DO have to keep on paying attention.

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