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Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-10-06 - 03:11 am Title: Even More…

didnt' even see when she had the kids..and how is theone with the black hair able to fly. Oh are they sort of transparenty..you dd say elemental.

Well I'm going for two females hard for me to see Wolverine wth males and I'm going for Jamila for the girl with white hair taken from James in Howelett and
Aurora for the black haired on like 'Ro...she has 'Ro too or Rora or Rory..which ever...

vB Loving this chapter and crazy too great descriptions of both wolvies.

Reviewer: joe mckee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-06 - 11:45 pm Title: Changes

interesting chapter but it created almost as many questions as it answered glad ta seee your updating this good story look forward ta where your going from here :)

Author's Response: Well, if it answered questions, I guess it served the purpose. I am trying to tie in events/situations stated before...going back to the thing that started it all, the accident. Next update coming soon....An' thanks for the update. Hoping for more from your end.

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-06 - 08:40 pm Title: Changes

ok i get it now but when will everything get back to normal for them?are the ororos coming apart in time or something? will they and the kids find their way back to their own time period? what will happen when they go back?or do i just have it all wrong? will the twins stay the same age or will they revert back? will ororo finally really explain what he hell is going on with this glowing in the mist mother earth thing? this story is a little bit hard to follow but this chap cleared up a littleof the confusion. I am looking foward to reading the next one hopefully more will be reaveled.

Author's Response: I really love your reviews, especially when you ask questions like this. Although I'll *try to* clear up things in the coming updates, let me try to get some here. Normal. Who says they aren't normal? The Ororos were linked only for a short time....more on that soon. Maybe in the next chapter itself. As for going back, I think we can safely assume that they will go back....unles.... For what will happen when they go back, it all depends TO when they go back!! Ororo's (Movie one) explanation coming up soon. Finally, the glowing mist....how about taking a look at (movie) Logan? As for the confusion...going into this fic. (esp. the last few chapters), I knew that there was an equal chance of make or break for it. I tend/like to use flashbacks and POVs...a lot. With this, I just wanted to give them a different twist i.e. kinda seperate for each character. We already had both Logans and round about both Ororos also. More coming soon!!

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-06 - 12:39 pm Title: Even More…

the more i read the more i'm confused.
right now i don't understand a thing!


Author's Response: Hmmm. It would help if you'd have stated what confused you. The reviews not only let me know readers' views but also sometimes they point out loopholes and bring to notice some point that I might have missed (or stated wrong).

Reviewer: Mimi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-06 - 11:09 pm Title: Even More…

Ths story is confusing as hell.

Author's Response: Sorry about that, but somewhere around chapter six, I decided to go ALL OUT in the whacky, confusing direction. However, even as I bring up new mysteries, I am trying to explain old ones and tie up loose ends. You'll get more in the next chapter. Please R&R.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-06 - 09:14 pm Title: Even More…

Still trying to figure out where 'Ro's been all this time, so fill me in, would ya? For names, I like something like Faith or Hope for a girl. I don't think the kids need the bones claws, personally, but it would be cool if they both had their pappy's healing factor and enhanced senses. For a boy, how about David, after Ororo's dad?

Author's Response: Will have 'Ro story soon. Hmm, Faith/Hope, interesting choices. I am not so sure about the claws either....but have to think about different powers than Kendall's (in Y&T). And I am leaning more and more towards David.

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Date: 04-08-06 - 09:06 pm Title: Flash-‘WAY’-Back

Now that's what I'm talkin' about! I like the suspense. I also like the town called Nowhere. Must be unnerving to be Logan and find yourself there, huh?

Author's Response: Well, it would be for anyone. Nowhere? Now where is that!! LOL

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-06 - 08:58 pm Title: Even More…

i'm so glag you are updating this regularly. lol i'm not confused at all so to me its awesome as usual BW. now that everyone is rounded up the plot can only get better.
boy:james
girl:anna-marie

Author's Response: Not confused. Hmmm. I don't know whether to be happy about it or to try harder to confuse you. LOL. current choices: boy: James, David Girl: Anna-Marie (esp. with the build up I have had for Logan's bond with Marie/Rogue)

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-06 - 08:19 pm Title: Even More…

... and here I thought it couldn't get any more confusing. I'm not getting it LOL. What's going on. Exactly I mean... ? ... I could use an explanation, step by step. Something easy for me to follow, since my mind seems to be too slow nowadays :D
I'm putting my hopes on the next chapter...

Names for the kids... Well, I like Kendall & James a lot :) But something completely different wouldn't hurt either, so here ya go: Tala (girl) & Dyami (boy).

Author's Response: Well, you gotta agree, I have answered a few questions, eg. where has movie logan been all this time, also what happened to movie Ororo and more imp. the kids. Will be explaining on those last two points in the next update. I am thinking of going with a different girl name than Kendall and as for the boy, its a toss b/w James and David.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-06 - 06:37 pm Title: Even More…

I am confused....**scratches head**

Author's Response: Confused? Why? For the names or for what is happening?

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-06 - 06:20 pm Title: Even More…

oh hell no?! what just happned here? I know its all going to be in the next update buit oh my gosh names for the twins hmmm. first off i think they should be one of each sex and the boy's name should be---ummmm james. I think there should be a jr type of thing going on here. for the girl i don't know i'll be back later with a name for her. I really want to know if she and the kids are going stop this glowing in the mist thing any time soon. looking foward to the next update soon! good chapter!

Author's Response: The reason I asked the readers was that I was thinking of possibly two girls or two boys....just for something different from my usual norm. However, it seems that the general consensus is for one of each. So far, I am thinking about, Boy (David, James), Girl (Kendall, Anna Marie...even I thought of using that). Will try to update by tomorrow.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-06 - 08:29 pm Title: Flash-‘WAY’-Back

Augh. Too short BW, yer killin' me. I need answers. Like now!! Get on it! :)

Author's Response: Short? Its in keeping with the other chapters of this fic. BTW....shorter faster, longer slowwwerrrr. Can you say Pot-Kettle-Black? BTW...should have another update by tomorrow!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-06 - 07:58 pm Title: Flash-‘WAY’-Back

Uhm, what?! I mean... WHAT!?
So UV Xavier met MV Logan seven years ago? ... ahm... o-kaaay.
... HOW?! Was Charles one of the creators of MovieVerse? ;) Heh, seriously, I'm lost... but intrigued. Even more so than I already was :)

Loved the name of the town. Nowhere. Nearly cost that guy some teeth, heh...

Just read your responses to my previous reviews. Can't wait to read UX#69 now. I just got #68 in the mail today... yeah, we are a little behind over here, heh. Oh well... :D
And yeah, I'm all up and runnin' again! Thanks :)

Author's Response: Well, like I said, things are getting fantastical. For a hint, refer to the first chapter. As for the UX. Hope you like 'em!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-06 - 07:37 pm Title: Surprising Revelations

OMG, so she IS fading... what does it mean? Her Logan doesn't seem to have the same problem, so what's happening to her and why?
Yay, MV Logan! :D Short appearance but yay!
I hope Charles will be doing some explaining soon... I'm dying to know! I want to know! Everything!
Poor Rogue on the MV side, she's all alone again. I really hope that's not going to last long...


Author's Response: Yes, she is fading. What it means. Well, its completely in the realm of 'fantasy'. Read the next chapter. You get all the movie Logan you want....with more on the way. As for the explanation. That too is on its way.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-06 - 07:19 pm Title: Family Matters

Whoa... I was sick fer a couple of days and what do I find when I get back?! Tons and tons of updates! OMG, I'm in haven :D

Rogue apologizing to Logan about what she said back then... that was great! Really! The best part was that Logan didn't turn away but took a step towards her. Opening up a bit. Finally :)
But omg, what's happening with the other Ro now? She's fading? As in vanishing?! Did the other side find a way to get her back maybe? Or does her (and Logan's) presence cause some trouble on the stability of the dimension they fell into? I can't wait to find out! Can't wait for the other Logan's appearance (have been waiting for what feels like forever! :) ).

On to the next chap, yay :)

Author's Response: Hope yer feelin' better now. As for the Rogue-Logan deal, imagine my surprise when I picked up Ult.X-Men (#69) this week. Seems like the writers are taking a similar direction as I used here. Whoo hoo for me. As for 'Ro (and HER Logan), things get really out of WHACK!! Read on. And in chapter #13, the other (movie) Logan finally makes a proper appearance, with the whole chapter to himself. BW

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