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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-06 - 04:25 am Title: Fishing n’ Catching

Okay, now I'm enjoying the suspense and wondering what will happen next with this alternate Logan. I hope he smokes cigars?

Author's Response: This latest chapter (#13) is all about Logan...the movie Logan.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-06 - 04:21 am Title: ‘Interesting’

For a moment, I almost couldn't tell if older Ororo was offering younger 'Ro the chance to feel the babies, or her chafing nipples. Might wanna look at that paragraph, although...it would put a naughty spin on the story!!!

I like Ororo with blue eyes, too. I keep hoping that in Ultimates, they will have Ororo go through some physicial transformation that will revert her eyes to blue, like they are supposed to be.

Author's Response: Ah...feeling the chafing nipples. Now that brings up an entirely different set of possibilites. After all what could be better than one Ororo.....How about two of 'em?

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-07-06 - 04:15 am Title: Decisions

It's always nice to read a story with an interesting plot. I always have trouble with plot. I love chapter three the best, I think. Good to see the history of Ultimates in here.

Author's Response: I hope you'll like chapter 13 too. Its (movie) Logan's story.

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-06 - 09:13 pm Title: Surprising Revelations

i like this story but i am waiting for all of the sides to meet up and see what happens. whats the deal with ororo not being pregnat? will she get the baies back? what will her logan think about it if he shows and she not pregnat anymore? what does the professer know and why did he not say anything to the team before he left ? oh hell i'll just wait for the next update! don't leave us hanging for too long!

Author's Response: All these questions will be answered soon with the latest chapter working as a prequel to that sub-section. please R&R it!!

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-06 - 06:28 am Title: Surprising Revelations

wow! comon next chapter i wanna find out what happens to ororo and what happens between this other logan and the x-men in that dimension... if that makes sense?!?! :P

Author's Response: Yup. Just posted the next chapter. Please R&R it!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-05-06 - 02:18 am Title: Family Matters

Woah....Storm faded?! Is that what happens when you leave the other world? I always thought there was a time warphole that opened up....sorta like 'Sliders' but that cool!! I like that moment actually...good thing they got that sorted out, although I will always hate Rogue (unless she becomes a villain, then she's worth my time). :D

Great new chappie and definitely can't wait for Xavier and Ro...that's important. Thanks for pointing out what we can wait to see.....I can't wait right now!! I love young 'Ro.

VB

Author's Response: More on the 'fading' in the next chapter. As for Rogue, hey, I can just let her go...can I!! Next update soon.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-01-06 - 11:29 am Title: Down, Downer, Downest

Thaaaaaank you for updating this one! :) *is happy*

Ohhh, what's going on with Ro and the Professor? I still wanna know! Are the babies alright? And where's Logan? He seems to be in the middle of nowhere with Ro reaching out to him somehow... I hope he's not just seeing things, getting all crazy or something... I'd like to see them reunited soon. Can't wait for the two Logans to meet :D
Good thing that at least one Logan is back at the mansion. Still not ready to admit to himself that what he feels is indeed love, but he's getting there I think... hopefully.

And on the other side they really gave up? Damn, there must be something more they could do or haven't tried yet. Even though it doesn't look like it but still... there just has to be something to hold on to, something to raise their hopes again...

More, more, more! Please :D I can't wait!

Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review. What's with 'Ro and Xavier. More on that in the next update. Logan. The movie one will also make a 'detailed' appearance soon. As for going crazy...he is already crazy!! Ultimate Logan. I am trying to write him differently than my usual depiction and more like his (Ultimate) comic character. The other side. Well, what do you expect when they have got nothing to go on...yet!! BW

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-01-06 - 03:06 am Title: Down, Downer, Downest

I do like this story, please update soon.

Author's Response: Updated it yesterday. Got no review from u!!

Reviewer: Echo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-06 - 04:21 am Title: Storm Clouds

Wait a minute! What happened to Ro??? Was it something Xavier did?? You know UV-Xavier can be a cad sometimes...



And which Logan was coming back to the mansion? Was it UV-Logan, or was it both??



I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-06 - 05:33 pm Title: Storm Clouds

OMG, what's happening to her? What's going on? Something wrong with the babies? More please!!!
Loved Jean's realization and Scott's forced spontaneity LOL

Reviewer: Echo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-06 - 05:37 pm Title: Sides of a Coin

Uh-Oh! The possibility of 2 Logans in the same place...! I can't wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-06 - 02:58 am Title: Sides of a Coin

This is great, I can't wait to see Charles in both worlds and his thought. I really did want a more indepth and uninterrupted moment between the 'Ro's so we can get an idea on UV 'Ro's view points...And i want her to have someen to talk to..she seems so alone in that world, besides Wolverine.

Not only that I can't wait to see and hear from Wovlerine this is great...

Okay I think I have had enough of Rogue and Kitty..and why is it Kitty seems to be the bad guy everywhere....can she get a bit of coolness except by dating the totally rad Peter Parker....does everyone know he's spider man in this world?

VB

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-06 - 06:56 pm Title: Sides of a Coin

I hope Henry will find something. Shouldn't be a problem now with his two new assistants ;)
Really enjoyed the girls-talk. Too bad they got interrupted. The intersting part was just about to begin, heh.
Looking forward to the next chapter! ... for obvious reasons :D

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-06 - 06:06 am Title: More Talk

I liked the length and I have been waiting to hear all of UV's Wolverine's input..so this was a great chapter, you practically read my mind as I posted my reviews. And again I really enjoyed this post. Now I want to see our normal Wolverine...i wonder if he's in this world....it would be interesting to see Wolverine normal and UV wolverine meeting each other....how wicked?!?!

VB

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-06 - 05:50 am Title: Fishing n’ Catching

Great new addition, again. Ohh you read my mind about UV Logan..I was just about to say something, since I haven't heard a peep out of him, and it seemed weird he didn't want to seek out Storm yet. Hmmm..I'd like to see the whole gang as well with Storm, kind of bumbling over with questions for their counterpart.

VB

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