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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 07:52 pm Title: Decisions

LOL, Scott wondering about what women see in Wolverine. I want the MV Logan to make an appearance even more now :)
Someone should put a stop to those stupid tests they want to run on Ro! Logan already confirmed her statements, so what's the use? *rolls eyes at Scott and Jean* Logan can smell "his" scent on her, maybe it's time for some protecting-the-pack/mate instincts to kick in...


Author's Response: *protecting-the-pack*...but it isn't his pack..is it. It is the MV Logan's. Also, the Scott-Jean thing will play out soon!!

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 04:05 pm Title: Me, Myself and….Oh No!!

how can you give kendel a break? the world needs a kendel

Author's Response: Well, I know the world needs a Kendall...but...well...the kids are still a long way away. Lets get to the basics first!!

Reviewer: RHapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 01:02 pm Title: Decisions

The only issue i have with this chapter is the idea of being used as a pincushion. Jean and Scott wants to run all these 'tests' on her. They are ready know shes who she says she is, so what's the point? what else could they possibly need to know about her that couldn't be asked? given wolverine's history with labs and being tested on I am very surprised he didn't voice objection.

Author's Response: The 'tests' and the need for them will be cleared up soon enough....as for Wolverine, what do think he is wont to do when such an 'emotionally' charged n' somewhat threatening situation comes up!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 08:34 am Title: Me, Myself and….Oh No!!

Pregnant! Twins :) Now I really want to know where Logan is...he must be worried out of his mind. And what about the rest of the MV team. Are they looking for their teammates?
I really enjoyed Bobby's comparison of the two Ros and his outcries during her revelations LOL.
Also loved Jean's fear of losing her position on top of the hierarchy with Ro doing nothing but standing there, heh.
I'd really like to see some private Ro/Ro talking or even Ro(MV)/Lo talking...


Author's Response: About the other Logan....haven't quite decided what to do with him. Also, Bobby is my character of choice for being the class/team clown (except the MV Bobby, who's a sod) Got a few RoRo moments coming up...as for RoLo....who knows!!

Reviewer: Echo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 04:42 am Title: Me, Myself and….Oh No!!

Well well well!!
We've got many a surprise going on here, lol! And I loved reading every minute of it!! Especially the part where Iceman made his 'observations', and Ro's admission of her relationship w/ MV Logan! Priceless!! I can't wait for the next update--and just where, pray-tell, IS that universe's Logan??


Author's Response: Bobby's 'observations' came from his crush on Storm in the Ultimate X-Men....just fleshed it out a bit. Next update coming soon....just not the MV Logan...yet!!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 02:08 am Title: Me, Myself and….Oh No!!

I'm liking this. If I sound surprised, i am, because I usually don't enjoy the whole dimension switching thing. Update soon, kay.

Author's Response: Have posted three chapters (ok, 2nd one was short) in a couple of days. Should have a couple more in the next two.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 12:18 am Title: Me, Myself and….Oh No!!

I may actually like this story. hope it continues as well.

Author's Response: I have the next chapter half done....and also the one after that. God knows, 2 chapters at once....whew!! Will be updating soon!!

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 07:36 pm Title: Me, Myself and….Oh No!!

Now this chapter definitely follows the first much more clearly and it has the same level of drama and action---well almost..all the shocked faces is just as bad as a sentinel. Anyway I really liked this addition. And now she's havign twins. Oh poor new Storm...what of Wovlerine..he wont' be wusy will he? I can see him getting attached to this Storm. Now where is her Wolverine is the question...and what is up with this Jean....you know me...any thing to hate on Jean is a good thing. Annoying bugger.

Oooh and Kitty is with Peter..as in Peter Parker? Now that is actually a great pair and I'd love to see more of that.

So was Polaris with Scott before she went off with Havok in this new world? That's interesting.

VB

Author's Response: The whole S/W/J and the Kitty/Peter (SM) thing is from the Ultimate universe....and so is the Scott-Lorna-Alex thing.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 07:16 pm Title: Strange Occurrences

Attack of the other worlds.....hahah!!! Wicked...so is Logan there or not? I'm not sure the impression I'm supposed to get from Storm's 'Logan?' great start in chapter 1..felt it could have been more detailed in chapter 2 and a bit longer. But all around good addition.

Author's Response: Logan....well, who knows where he is. The second chapter was just supposed to give us a view of Ororo...before we got on with the main story.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 06:57 pm Title: Me, Myself and….Oh No!!

Whoa! What a revelation! So, looks like you updated while I was reading! You are so fast it’s incredible. I always wish I could be as inspired as you and as productive.

This is a great idea. I really like Ultimate as it’s more like the old traditional X-Men. That being said, I loved your Bobby – love your knowledge of the comics and how he was crushing on Ororo, loved his reactions to having a second Storm there. A very good chapter, made me laugh a few times, but what I want to know is where’s that feral papa?

Author's Response: I had initially planned on a Uncanny/Movie or Uncanny/Ultimate x-over, but seeing that I do not write in Uncanny anymore, I had to switch to an alternate. As for the feral papa, haven't yet decided what to do with him....!!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 06:35 pm Title: Prologue

Wow! I'm really looking forward to this story. I like crossing over stories like this and I'll definitely try to keep up with your fast updates as time permits. I'm on vacation but will try to read more tonight!

Author's Response: Thanks Darlin. I'll try to keep the updates frequent...this is my first x-over and hopefully I'll be able to do justice to it.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 01:12 pm Title: Strange Occurrences

Whoa... another dimension err verse! That's so cool! Did Logan land there too? (two Logans LOL Scott would "love" that, heh :D)
It must feel pretty weird. Coming "home" just to find out that you are not home at all.
What's Ro gonna do now? Where's Logan? Can this be fixed? Update, update! Please :)

Author's Response: Chapter 3 coming soon. As for Logan...who knows and seemingly only 'Ro cares!!

Reviewer: Echo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 12:58 pm Title: Strange Occurrences

Uh-Oh! 'Verse crossovers! I love it! I can't wait to see how the MV RoLo react toward their UV counterparts! Update, update!!

Author's Response: Well...I am not so sure about the 'Lo' part...yet!! But you get a lot of Ro-Ro conversations going.

Reviewer: Echo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 12:16 am Title: Prologue

Well, BW--
You've certainly got me hooked! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update, update!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. Posted chapter 2 and 3 is on its way. Should have it up by tonight!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-05-06 - 05:15 pm Title: Prologue

Whaa... where did they go? Did the sentinel transport them away somehow? I mean, I don't think it blasted them into oblivion, right... uhm... right?
... Oooh, that's such an evil point for a cliffhanger! I need to know what happened. Soon! ... Now! :)
A real nice start. Can't wait to find out what you are up to with this story. :)


Author's Response: I aalways appreciate that you take the time to review each and every one of my works (each chapter). As for what happened...stay tuned for the next chapter!!

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