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Reviewer: Lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-06 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 05

I remember this, but it seems to have been updated. I am enjoying the daywalker addition.

Reviewer: Darkdevil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-06 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 05

Wow!! This is good i'm be looking
for more chapters.

Reviewer: Moaricai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-06 - 06:04 am Title: Chapter 05

good story. As for song credits... "Spectre General" is really "Kick Axe". They changed name only for transformers movie. Orginal version made by "King Kobra" :) And story is good ( i'm not good at reviews) hope to see more of your work.

Reviewer: X181 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-06 - 03:39 am Title: Chapter 05

I am so enthralled by this fic, interesting angle and I can't wait to see where you take it :-).

Reviewer: X181 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-06 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter 05

I am so enthralled by this fic, interesting angle and I can't wait to see where you take it :-).

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-06 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 05

Very intriguing and quite well written. I love your stories because you write so well. It's truly as if we're witnessing the events taking place. I really like how Logan came to her rescue which should mess with Forge - the whole ordeal was splendidly and realistically done.

I suppose the only thing I didn't quite care for were the song lyrics which felt more like an interruption of an integral moment here but I know there are many who love the addition of the lyrics, and love song fics. I'm just not one of them and truthfully, as I can skip over them depending upon the nature of the story/chapter it takes nothing away from my enjoyment other than skipping down to the continuing story. Not trying to be picky. That aside, the story is superb and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Darlin, as always!

As for the lyrics, I only include them to drive home the point I'm making in the context of the story, and to give you guys a little insight into how the writing process goes for me. I think I mentioned before that I write to music, and so the rhythm of the song and the lyrics are important to me.

That said, I understand how you'd wanna just get to the meat and leave the superfluous gravy, lol. I've done the same on occasion in reading fanfics. I just hope I can still have a lyric or two & keep yer attention. Lemme know.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-06 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 05

Poor Ro, I feel for her. All this time of denial, winning over the strong need for blood and then being forced to throw it all away... I wonder what she'll do when she finds out Forge didn't give the stuff to her on purpose.
Ooooh my... Ro straddling Logan biting him, feeding off of him... that's quite sexy. Especially since it's a shirtless Logan LOL
Yum!


Author's Response: heh heh, suffice it to say, Forge isn't gonna want to be anywhere in the general area when/if Ro finds out how he likes to play games.

LOLOL...I'm glad you enjoyed the "Feeding Scene"--It was just as much fun to write, lemme tell ya!

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-06 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 05

That was hot! 'Ro feeding off Logan..if only they took it to the next level

Author's Response: LOL...I didn't want her taking THAT much advantage of the poor guy! A little taste of blood was going to be it...for the moment.

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-06 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 05

GOODNESS! i bet he tasted good! **winks** i jest! But anyway, we gotta wait days for the next installation. *pouts* Hope Remy doesn't walk in on them and react in the worst way.

I'm all for jean bashing by the way

Author's Response: Well, I'm getting done a lot quicker, rhapsody, so maybe I can squeeze on out tonight...

Lololol! Glad to hear I'm not the only one who doesn't like 'Red'!

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-06 - 08:19 am Title: Chapter 05

Nice way to show Logan's fighting the 'virus'.

Looking forward to more!!

Author's Response: Hey thanks BW! I had to really re-read that whole angle before posting it...I wasn't sure if it was gonna fly or not. I have to remind myself that Logan isn't COMPLETELY invinsible (well, depends on who u ask, I guess!)

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