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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-27-06 - 01:17 pm Title: View from the Patio

Ah, that 's so nice! I loved her being able to see her mother, speak to her. She was so childlike. It was sweet and very appropriate.

Author's Response: Thanks, buddy. I wanted to capture something different in her internal monologue on that one; I think when someone has a brush with death like that, they revert back to their childhood a little. Glad you liked this chapter.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-22-06 - 06:34 am Title: View from the Patio

Damn those near death experiences!...on to chapter 4

Author's Response: Near death...nothing like it to bring heroes together and get a clue about what's under their noses!

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