Date: 05-17-06 - 01:17 pm Title: One
If Logan decides to come back it's going to be pretty hard to look at Scott's smug grin without planting a fist right into it LOL. But then again, Logan did try to off him, so I guess that's just something he has to endure ;)
Date: 04-14-06 - 10:48 pm Title: One
hey, will there be more? i am hooked
Date: 04-11-06 - 02:18 am Title: One
Nice. Ultimate from the near beginning, my favorite. I like this. I like your style. I always like finding new author's especially if they're RoLo shippers. I'm wondering won't you tell us a little something about yourself in your bio perhaps? And are you thinking about posting at fanfiction.net? We need good RoLo stories spread far and wide.
Well, Bright Lady welcome to the site. I'm looking forward to reading your other story and further chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words Darlin. I love reading your fics BTW. I wouldn't know how to post a story at ff.net. I'm still a little computer illiterate. Thanks again and I'll try to update soon.
Date: 04-09-06 - 02:32 am Title: One
The narrative in this was good because it didn't overexplain who anyone was, or what the relationships were, the dialogue said it all. The exposition was perfect. I can't wait til you add more chapters. I'm just starting to read Ultimates myself, so this is a learning experience for me.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. I'm new to Ultimate too. It may take me a while to update because I'm a procrastinator.