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Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-02-08 - 09:13 pm Title: 1

This fic has a lot of potential but I feel like the scene was a little rushed and the transition between emotional breakdown and sex felt a little uncomfortable. You could do a little more to enhance the emotional background of the story... It just feels too shallow. I'd love to help if you would like.

Author's Response: Thank you, i would like your help

Reviewer: ororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-10-07 - 07:54 pm Title: 1

continue!!!! its really good!!!!

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-06 - 04:07 pm Title: 1

This fic is pretty good, I'd like to read more and see where the story goes. So update A.S.A.P.

Reviewer: random gal Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04-10-06 - 11:57 pm Title: 1

The story is OK, but you really need to refine your writing. Some parts seem rushed and the bad grammar makes other parts hard to understand. Now that you started writing you should look for more ways to improve, there are amazing writers around who can guide you through the process, so you can become one of them.

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-10-06 - 02:35 pm Title: 1

loved the part bout Jean bein a cold hearted bitch. haha..lol. this cant be the end rite?.... come on. u gotta continue this. give me more Jean hating parts. u really really gotta continue this. =D

Author's Response: im gonna continue it salad dont worry and thanks

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