Punctuation fixes would make this perfect, but it's still a good read.

The last paragraph has feeling in it, but would be stronger if the last two sentences were flipped around.

Logan stared at the door, he did not know what he had done or said to make her seem like she hated
him. He could not exactly see her emotion but could sense it. Her mood had changed and she had turned back to the Ice Queen. She was cold and detatched.

Try it this way:

Logan didn't know what he had done or said to make her seem like she hated him. He sensed her emotion rather than saw it; she was cold and detached. Ororo's mood had changed, and she had turned back into the Ice Queen.

Anyway, feel free to disregard it if you want. I just hope you continue writing this story. You have a nice way with plots and dialogue in your stories, something I always admire. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: No I don't mind thank you for correcting me, it helps. And I will continue, thanks!