you know, i like this story, but one thing that would help you as a writer is to "show" a bit more instead of telling. Like how you say Ororo hated herself for the way she felt when Scott kissed her etc... Perhaps it would be better to show her hating herself through more description of how perhaps her body and mind are at war. Things like that.

**looking forward to next chapter**

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice, I dunno, I have all the ideas in my mind but cant write them down proper. Update is very soon