Man, 'Ro's trippin'!

Big risk, having Ororo planning to get rid of it, particularly if she's already thinking of raising the baby elsewhere, too. The bit about "do you just wanna catch AIDS?" raised my eyebrows.

You've still got me. I want to see how this turns out. I also want to see Logan step up to the plate on this one and prove he loves her. Man better walk the walk!

The only thing here that lacked intensity was this:

“’Ro you know I love you, if I had let you die that day you don’t know how much that would have screwed me up”.

There isn't much here showing his physical reaction to her telling him he should have let her die. "Screwed me up" here just feels like she forgot to wash his whites or update his day planner. He could've almost said "If I had let you die that day, I would've wanted ta kill myself, 'Ro! I would've wanted ta f---in' die!" But I'm overdramatic that way. He should have been gripping her hands or shoulders or something, here, too. The man's baby's on the line.

I hope you update this soon. More, please.