Damn! I have not been on this site for a thousand years. It's nice to finally read some rolo fanfiction. Really loving this fic so far, I'm glad this is the first fic I've read in a while. Can't wait for the next chapter, update A.S.A.P.

Ok. I tried to review this a ffnet and ffnet just sputtered and died. To not actually be a guy you don't do so bad at writing us. You can really see the difference between Ororo's and Logan's thought process. It's silk and sandpaper.

Nice. This is moving along well. Good tension. It has an edgy feel to it, it kind of makes you crave an outburst, and feel like one is coming...is one? (grins hopefully)

You're still fighting that ending?? Like the changes you made to this section. So many fine details. You can really feel the pain. It wasn't bad the way you had it at first but now there's much more there that doesn't just show the sorrow. Now let's talk about that other story that needs an update.

My connection is being weird. I hope that I can post this this time around.

You really didn't have to thank me. Anything for my favorite writer of the man fandoms. Complete inFANity on your part I tell ya. I would've preferred you waited until the story was completely finished to post it because I feel like each part draws from the next. I just had to keep going with the story. The story starts slow but foreboding in a way. It's like a growing storm. Each section builds up to the next and the ultimate climax. No pun intended.

But I can't be selfish. I have my preference because I have read the fic. Other readers will see it differently than me. I'm can't wait to see the ending though. I know it'll be awesome. I hope that posting this will inspire you with your ending.