Yes! I loved the beginning, it was hilarious and the details! You describe everything so perfectly, never overdone, never too little. I can imagine every small thing but not only that they’re fun details. Hello Kitty flashing light sandals, Sponge Bob Square Pants cup – I love that.

I also enjoy the use of the plethora of Marvel characters. It took me a moment to figure out just who the Powers were and let me tell you I just laughed and laughed when I figured it out. That’s what makes AU fun. It’s author’s like you and Digital Temptest, Kravitzkid, and Echo that have made me appreciate AU – good AU.

This is the second story I’ve read by you, CeeCee and I’m inducting you into Darlin’s favorites – hah! Like that’s a big deal but hey, it is to me. I’m beyond impressed. I love this story, simply couldn’t put it down. Fun, well written and near about perfect!


Author's Response: I'm glad you liked those bits of this story, Darlin. I have kids, so that's all stuff that's easily found around my house. I was wondering when someone would notice that Power Pack was crawling around in the background...I used to love that comic title. Particularly the issue when Katie first met Logan! Ah, good times!!!

LUVEEED IT, :D dnt stop now!! keep goin wid dis story, am so into it.

Author's Response: ...going to keep going, I promise. One more chapter, possibly two, depending on what the characters tell me while I'm thinking about them. Glad you enjoyed it.