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Reviewer: stormlover Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-14 - 11:50 am Title: Chafed

Really enjoying this story. Had to tell ya the way he asked the question was so sweet and cool.

Reviewer: Minarya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-08-06 - 12:31 am Title: Chafed

I'm really enjoying this story! Lots of realistic little details that only make it more full and rich ... and despite how quickly they got together (which was beautiful!) the relationship development has a very nice pace to it! I hope this next chapter really isn't your last. LOL!

Author's Response: The next one is, depending on how long the sucker is. Hard to end this... I originally only wanted this story to be about four chapters long, but that was how long it took me to "hook them up," and I wanted to do more with it from there. I'm glad you like the pace.

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-06 - 11:04 pm Title: Chafed

I am so into this story I am a little sad that it is coming to an end.I really love jubilee in this story that, hair scence was pricelss! I like how they are both going through the same type of feelings but are so scared to say anything about it to each other b/c they don't think that the other will understand. It all comes across so real.update soon

Author's Response: I've been hitting stops and starts with the dialogue, trying really hard to avoid something that I can't imagine real people saying. Glad you've tuned in this long. Next chapter's a loooonnngg one.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-06 - 01:36 pm Title: Chafed

That is just sooo cute!!!!!!!! Vewy vewy cute. I loved all the tension and the way they resolved. Talking to dead people...LOL. Those talks reminded me of something i heard in a movie "Till death do us part. We're apart". You know what would be really perfect to finish this story off with? A wedding! *hint* Pure RoLo curteness, and an overhyped Jubes. Maybe a bachlorette party wouldn't hurt either. Update very soon!

Author's Response: A bachelorette party...how funny, I just wrote a story out on Fanfiction.net about that very thing, except it was Ororo's wedding to the Black Panther and her having cold feet. But yeah, an overhyped Jubes sounds pretty good! Good idea. The note about "conversations with dead people" in the summary was of course inspired by a Buffy episode of the same name, since that's my favorite show.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-06 - 11:21 am Title: Chafed

I love this. It is so wonderfully engaging and filled with such depth and character. I loved the conversations wit Mariko and Jonathin. Brilliantly done. This is going on my favorites list right now. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! The first three chapters of this story rolled out of me pretty easily, until I realized that "happily ever after" was something I wanted these two to actually work for. Could just play it safe and make it fluffy. Darn it! ;-)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-06 - 09:32 am Title: Chafed

Well I like the relationship between Jubes and Ro but I expected Logan to pop a different question. Suppose it's a start. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Logan may eventually pop said question...a few more obstacles are in the way, since this chapter was named "Chafed." They've only been together a few weeks; not quite enough to build a marriage on yet, but I'm working on it ;-)

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