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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-06 - 07:53 am Title: That Funny Little Tickle

A very nice chapter. Very realistic.

Author's Response: Thanks, Darlene. I had to dig around my head for what I wanted to say, but it felt good once I laid it out on the page.

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-06-06 - 10:33 pm Title: That Funny Little Tickle

I really am enjoying this story a lot! I can't wait for you to get into more details about Forge in this story. Please update this story soon

Author's Response: I'm still trying to figure out how to flesh him out. Ororo may be having conversations with his ghost shortly...stay tuned. And thanks for tuning in, good to hear from you.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-06-06 - 09:20 pm Title: That Funny Little Tickle

I am really enjoying this story. I laughed, I sat forward, i fanne dmyself, I was happy, sad and all the inbetweens. Keep up the amazing work!!

Author's Response: Your own story had me breaking out the fan...chee maneez! Best lap dance I ever read!!! But thanks for visiting. The next chapter is forthcoming, if I can hold a coherent thought...

Reviewer: Feli Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-01-06 - 08:07 pm Title: Better?

I love this story but you really gotta update i cant believe you just left it there you are so mean write more soon please

Author's Response: Still writing! I promise! Still trying to figure out where to go next! Darn writer's block...but I have some paragraphs in the queue.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-01-06 - 02:51 pm Title: Better?

Wow! That's so HOT! ;) I love this story. I just read all 5 chapters of it last night and it was well worth it. I like the way you write the characters, you've caputed their essence and brought it into an AU with no powers. That's most definetly not easy. Kepp on writing, i can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Glad you're tuning in; I hope not to make anyone wait too long. Figuring out how to finish is stumping me. I hate when that happens...the love scene was fun to write, though!!! ;-)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-01-06 - 01:39 am Title: Better?

Wow! I am sooooo liking this story, CeeCee! I can’t wait till you update! You might not believe it but I worked all night, came home hung out with my girls, started and finished a book by Pearl S. Buck, one of my favorite authors btw, and then delved into your story and despite getting kicked out of the Internet repeatedly I was determined to finish this story! I’ m so happy you’re writing, so happy to have found your stories. And really looking forward to the next update! Think I mentioned that though. And thanks for the replies which made me smile and also reassured me about this story. Excellent!

Author's Response: (smiling widely) Thank you, Darlin! Kicked out of the Internet repeatedly, and you still stuck with this story? Now that's flattering! Still untangling this story, I've had SO little time to sit down. Updates soon.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-01-06 - 12:24 am Title: Wet

Another brilliant chapter but it looks like they’re going to rush into something pretty quickly there. Pretty fast pace. Once again, terribly well written and I have to say it’s as if we’re reading about something that really did happen, actual events from the smallest detail to the most important.

Author's Response: Yup, fast. My bad...but again, I'm modernizing "Princess and the Pea" with some grown-up twists, and nothing that happens on Logan's couch will go without some repercussions! They will even have a talk soon about how they "did things backwards," which will be a bit of a first for me.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-06 - 11:47 pm Title: Room to Spread Out

I’m thinking Scott, Alex what are you doing to my girl and then in walks Logan and I’m so excited you’d think it was me and not Ororo in that bar! Lol! But that shows how well you write. A very nice chapter, indeed. Very interesting turn of events too. Curious whom her hubby was.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm sure that chapter will spawn some Summers brothers bashing...(grins). Her hubby will be divulged soon. More details on Logan's wife, too.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-06 - 11:11 pm Title: Damn Tourists

Oooo! I love this story! I love this story! I love this story! I love this story! Can’t say it enough. It’s great when everyone has such fantastic stories now! I’m in RoLo heaven! This is just so good! You know when you had Mrs. Powers come in I already felt like I knew here. Your details are that good, very vivid. This is really good!

And you know lengthy is good when the story grabs you like this one despite the length of time it may take to finish it in one sitting! I also really like the little bits of fairy tale scattered throughout this. I’m so enjoying this story!


Author's Response: I don't always do "lengthy," it depends on the theme I'm working with. Sometimes a story can "write itself," and sometimes it's all I can do to write one page uninterrupted without losing my train of thought. (Knock Me Off My Feet was one that had me stopping and starting for a month) And Princess and the Pea was one of my favorite tales as a kid. Can't say why...thanks for visiting, Darlin.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-06 - 10:27 pm Title: High Maintenance

Yes! I loved the beginning, it was hilarious and the details! You describe everything so perfectly, never overdone, never too little. I can imagine every small thing but not only that they’re fun details. Hello Kitty flashing light sandals, Sponge Bob Square Pants cup – I love that.

I also enjoy the use of the plethora of Marvel characters. It took me a moment to figure out just who the Powers were and let me tell you I just laughed and laughed when I figured it out. That’s what makes AU fun. It’s author’s like you and Digital Temptest, Kravitzkid, and Echo that have made me appreciate AU – good AU.

This is the second story I’ve read by you, CeeCee and I’m inducting you into Darlin’s favorites – hah! Like that’s a big deal but hey, it is to me. I’m beyond impressed. I love this story, simply couldn’t put it down. Fun, well written and near about perfect!


Author's Response: I'm glad you liked those bits of this story, Darlin. I have kids, so that's all stuff that's easily found around my house. I was wondering when someone would notice that Power Pack was crawling around in the background...I used to love that comic title. Particularly the issue when Katie first met Logan! Ah, good times!!!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-29-06 - 11:59 pm Title: Better?

*opens windows* My oh my that was a hot little romp.... :D

Wow.

Yeah. I'll, uh, I'll come back when I can think...


**Big grin and thumbs way way up**

Author's Response: ...this from the woman who made my eyebrows steam and curl from the heat radiating off my computer when I was scrolling through "Bloodbonds." Thumbs up right back atcha! In the wake of all the panther weddin' crap, I NEEDED to write a romp...I love these two together. Read ya later! (hint, hint...)

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-29-06 - 09:31 pm Title: Better?

i love it! thank you . i love how in your stories you include other x-people.it gives us a chance to see diffrent sides to them. i always find your stuff so easy to follow and get into. if i ever figure out how to log in the right way on this site you will be on my list of favs. please update soon and thanks for putting up so many chapters at once!

Author's Response: (grins and dances up and down) Thanks! I'm so glad someone can follow my stuff. Sometimes, even I don't know where I'm going with it. I like supporting characters, but I flounder when I have too many at once. Thanks for visiting, ebony.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-29-06 - 08:17 pm Title: Better?

Hmmm. Aah. Ummm. Uhmmnnn.

I have been usually skipping on the 'raunchier' side of fics lately (maybe because reading too many of them made it difficult to think about writing anything else in mine)....but urs, they are ALWAYS a revelation.

Looking forward to the next chapter...X ot non-X rated.

BW

Author's Response: Still deciding on the next chapter. Guaranteed to have some angst-ridden, grown-up discussions in it, possibly some lovin,' haven't decided. Hope this didn't delve too far into the realm of "raunch" for you. I always try not to go over the top...well, I do. Really.

Reviewer: kravitzkid Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-29-06 - 07:14 pm Title: High Maintenance

I love a good AU story, especially now in these trying times. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: I'm just grateful that you called this a GOOD AU story. My main worry was writing something that resembled the X-Men so little that people said "HUH?" And yes, these are trying times, indeed. Good hearing from you.

Reviewer: storm_the_windrider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-29-06 - 06:35 pm Title: High Maintenance

LUVEEED IT, :D dnt stop now!! keep goin wid dis story, am so into it.

Author's Response: ...going to keep going, I promise. One more chapter, possibly two, depending on what the characters tell me while I'm thinking about them. Glad you enjoyed it.

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